My Speech (Cooper)
I am waiting for my speech when Aqua swims over. "Hi, Coop!" says Aqua. "Hello, Aqua. Nice to see you now." I reply "Are you about to make your speech" he asks. "Yes, I am!" "Can I help get people to come listen?" "That would be nice." "Okay I will do it." "Thanks Aqua." Aqua dives to go somewhere. I wonder how this water got on Halfmoon. "Cooper! It is time for your speech." calls a speaker. I go over to the stage. "I believe that on Halfmoon we should look for the other half. Devin might be looking to destroy it, and dragging Aidan in, but we can stop it. I have found a scroll that says 'Kooba koo ra eeko la vemo Fullmoon' or 'A spirit is coming to save you. She is the Savior, who will reform Fullmoon'. I believe that there will be a savior but there will be a great war first. We must train warriors for the great battle. The bad guys are forming armies of monsters." "Good job!" shouts some angel in the crowd. Nice to be appreciated.
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But maybe with longer chapters...
And I liked how u introduced the characters at the beginning
I love your characters!