Obi and I

Obi and I

Obi is a fully grown turtle. Indie, a lonely 4 year old girl. Obi and Indie Rose share a special bond that people try to break, but nothing can stop them.

published on January 06, 2013completed

"Obi?"

"Obi?"
"Hi moma!" Indie exclaimed, "Nice mornin', isn't it! A lovely day to go to the zoo!" Mrs Drake felt bad for what had happened the day before, so she decided to treat her daughter, "Oh, why not then!" she crouched down beside her daughter, tapping her nose, "How about, me and you go get some ice-cream and go to the zoo?" she loved seeing the excitement on Indie's adorable face!
"So what kind of ice-cream are going to get?" asked Mrs Drake, starting up the car, "I don't know, maybe chip choc chip!" they both laughed.
Finally, they arrived at the zoo. They got their ice-cream and walked around the zoo, which was when they remembered that there wasn't any other animals left from the infection that had been going round. "Oh moma," said Indie, "I had this dream last night that I was in the zoo and Obi started flying, he said that he had to go to heaven, but then I woke up and noticed it was a dream!" her mother's face froze when she saw a crowd of zoo members swarming around the turtle's pen, "Stay here Indie!" and she ran over to the crowd, "What's going on?" they all looked at each other like they were clueless workers that didn't know anything, when finally, one of them spoke up, "Uh, are you the mom of that tiny girl?" she replied with a "duh" look as she pointed over to her daughter licking ice-cream, but thankfully she didn't have to deal with these pinheads anymore for Mr Syphilis came along, "Oh, Mrs Drake, I can't tell you how sorry I am but-" "Obi's dead isn't he?" they turned round only to see Indie's gloom face, she was always there when some shocking news was being told (which her mother hated) "Little girl, I wish I could tell you different," Mr Syphilis answered, kneeling down beside her, "but Obi is a very old turtle, he had a great life though and he also loved you. But sadly dear, he died last night in his sleep, but we found him smiling; his arms were spread out also as if he was flying! He must have had a nice dream." "Probably dreamin' about you Indie." said her mother, trying to make her daughter feel better. "Moma," said Indie, managing a smile, "I told you about the dream I had, didn't I? Well, I think Obi was telling me that he was gonna die. But I'm proud of Obi, he was my best friend, and I'll always love him. But Mr zoo keeper, can I see him?" he and Mrs Drake looked at each other, "Okay then."
Indie hugged Obi and sang to him, "I had a turtle, his name is Obi, he was my pet and my best friend, I love him so and I'll never forget, the best time was the time we first met." she stopped and dropped one tear only, "Oh Obi, I love you so much."
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on January 04, 2019
Turtles suck!
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on January 04, 2019
So sad and touching... I cried my eyes out when Obi died :(( :(( :((
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haha i havent been on qfeast in ages and i just read my story and the comments again omg thank you so much xD XXX
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on March 02, 2015
Thank you, you are very polite!
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on March 01, 2013
Awww such a cute story! So touching! :')
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on March 01, 2013
No hablo blahblahblah
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on March 01, 2013
hmmm
i hate haters
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on February 28, 2013
couple of days
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on January 31, 2013
hmm
how long did it take you
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on January 29, 2013
That's what a good story has
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on January 19, 2013
but its really long
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on January 19, 2013
thanx
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on January 17, 2013
ya

well obviously
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on January 15, 2013
Your welcome, did you like it?
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on January 06, 2013
thanx
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on January 06, 2013