Legend Walkers

Legend Walkers

this story is a short series that will have a new chapter added every week. this is the story about Jake Malorn, an young, 14 year old boy who finds himself in a world in which he and his friends have special powers. but can they put together the puzzle before time runs out?

published on November 09, 2013not completed

Schools Out

The bus was wrecked, and we had to walk to school, i wish we didnt, because i just wanted to go home think about everything that happened. And my legs started to get sore, and people were complaining. and then i noticed our walk was in vein, because the first glance i caught of the school, i saw spray paint, and ashes. somebody burnt the school down. and on the sides of the school, were big words that said "the Light Binder returns"  and "you wont see the last of me" "who did THIS?!?" i heard principle Roy over near a small crowd of parents. "its ok, i think we can go for a break from school anyway" said vice principle Doman "i mean, next weak Fall break starts, so i guess we cold go a couple days, its what, three?"
  "Ok, i guess your right, but what about the laptops and valuebles inthe school?" asked Roy
"The insurance will cover it, relax Roy, there no-" Doman was interrupted by screaming, as they saw a young Man wearing a black hoodie emerge from the schools ruins"WHERE IS HE? WHERE IS THE LIGHTBINDER? I WILL FIND HIM, AND THENYOU WIL ALL PERISH!" and in a puff of smoke, the boy vanished. "W-hat was that?" i gasped.
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I saw "Jake" and I screamed that is my name why am I in cringe
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on April 25, 2016
AWESOME! please write more! Keep me updated!
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thx! im coming out with a webcomic, but its a LOOOOONGGG way from being done. Thx for the self esteem :D
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 17, 2014
ill do my best :D
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Yaaay!! You're a really good writer btw
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 17, 2014
due to chapter being derleted from my files, and through some requests, im making this a creepy-pasta related story. as in jake encounters people like the slenderman, jtk, smile dog, etc.
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on June 17, 2014
any tips, and or requests, for the series?
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on May 13, 2014
that what i was ding, only it wasnt n a flash drive
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on January 06, 2014
whoa cool, and I don't know how to save your deleted chapters, they should have saved to your qfeast account,but next time to make sure they don't get deleted, make them in a word dock and save them to a flash drive. Just copy and paste from there! :)
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on January 03, 2014
sorry, i have writers block, and the chapters that were save on my lapop got deleted by a virus, help?
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on December 11, 2013
thx for the tips!
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on November 12, 2013
Its really good, just add capilization on the character's names, but other than that..SO AWESOME AND ORIGINAL :D
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on November 12, 2013
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on November 10, 2013
ooh nice so far!
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on November 10, 2013