Legend Walkers

Legend Walkers

this story is a short series that will have a new chapter added every week. this is the story about Jake Malorn, an young, 14 year old boy who finds himself in a world in which he and his friends have special powers. but can they put together the puzzle before time runs out?

published on November 09, 2013not completed

Light binder come forth

Light binder come forth he lifted he right hand "blood-reds redemption" he said, followed by a flash of light that sent me flying backward, landing on my back. i looked up, and saw him holding a scythe."are you ready to face your death?" he asked sarcastically. he lifted his scythe, and brought it down, i pulled up the sword, just in time to block the deadly strike. "give it up, lightbinder, you aint got nothing"
"STOP CALLING ME THAT" i shouted as i threw his power against him, i stood to my feet. i charged after him, sword in hand. he swung his scythe, and i thought i heard my own head split. but i looked up, the scythe had been blocked by the sword. and i heard the whisper again "concentrate once more" i closed my eyes, and the sword blade started glowing. "iron-will" it said "iron-will' "IRON-WILL" the whisper was now a shout "iron-will" i said. and a blast of light sent him in the other direction.
i ran over to him, laying on the ground, he was paralyzed. yet he kept that smile on his face. i put the sword to his throat, and pushed it just hard enough to get out a drop of blood. "now, tell me who you are, what you want, and where your from", but he only laughed, and faded into the ground, with a laugh so haunting it sent chills down my spine "you haven't seen the last of me" he said, still laughing, and vanished. i looked at the sword, "silver bane?" as soon as i said it, the sword vanished with the same flash that it appeared. i turned around "oh no" i said when i saw the bus. the windows were broken, and everyone seemed lifeless, like time was standing still. i ran over to the bus and pulled out my sister. "i thank god" i said "shes only unconscious." i crawled into the bus and started to pull people out. i finally got everyone out, then i turned around. a man standing in white was there, smiled, and vanished, and the people around me started to wake up. i heard the whisper on more time "the light binder come forth"
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I saw "Jake" and I screamed that is my name why am I in cringe
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on April 25, 2016
AWESOME! please write more! Keep me updated!
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thx! im coming out with a webcomic, but its a LOOOOONGGG way from being done. Thx for the self esteem :D
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 17, 2014
ill do my best :D
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Yaaay!! You're a really good writer btw
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 17, 2014
due to chapter being derleted from my files, and through some requests, im making this a creepy-pasta related story. as in jake encounters people like the slenderman, jtk, smile dog, etc.
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on June 17, 2014
any tips, and or requests, for the series?
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on May 13, 2014
that what i was ding, only it wasnt n a flash drive
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on January 06, 2014
whoa cool, and I don't know how to save your deleted chapters, they should have saved to your qfeast account,but next time to make sure they don't get deleted, make them in a word dock and save them to a flash drive. Just copy and paste from there! :)
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on January 03, 2014
sorry, i have writers block, and the chapters that were save on my lapop got deleted by a virus, help?
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on December 11, 2013
thx for the tips!
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on November 12, 2013
Its really good, just add capilization on the character's names, but other than that..SO AWESOME AND ORIGINAL :D
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on November 12, 2013
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on November 10, 2013
ooh nice so far!
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on November 10, 2013