Scootaloos life!

Scootaloos life!

So yeah, this is a random story I'm working on, and It's about me! :D SWAG.

published on October 05, 2013not completed

Rarity

Rarity
As I raced towards Rarity's stress shop on my scooter, I thought of how so many things could have happened today. Getting adopted by my hero, and getting my cutie mark!
As Rarity's dress shop came up in front of me I jumped of my scooter and went into her dress shop. A pony with a cream colored mane and a chocolate brown coat was standing behind a desk, working on a computer. Large posters of Rarity's latest designs were pasted over the walls. Copies of Rarity'sfashoin magazine "Chewy Cotoure" were put on a long white table in the middle of the room.
"Excuse me ma'am, but may I see Rarity?" I asked the secretary. She glared at me with ocean blue eyes from under her white glasses.
"Do you have an appointment?" She asked dully. I shook my head.
"Please ma'am? It's very important!"
"No!" she said.
Suddenly, Rarity walked out from a curtained hallway and came over to us.
"What is going on Cremé?" Rarity asked.
"MissRarity, this foal has been pestering me and demanding that I let her see you. She even threatened me when I said no!" Cremé said, with a snarl in her voice.
"WHAT! I never threatened you!" I gaped.
Rarity shook her head. "Cremé! I've had enough! Go work in the back room sorting fabrics, tell Russet to come out here." Cremé grumbled and walked through an old wooden door to the workers area. " Now Scootaloo, what is it?" Rarity asked.
"Look!" I showed her my flank. My orange and pink lightning bolt shined in the bright light.
Raity poor her hoof to her mouth and gasped. I quickly told her about my day.
"Scootaloo! I'm so happy! And it does look like rainbow Dashs! Oh, you deserve a new dress! Come on, come on!" Rarity said happily.
"Erm, Rarity, I'm sorta in a hurry. I have to tell EVERYONE about my cutie mark and I have to get back to RDs house for dinner!"
" Ha ha ha! Sorry, but when you have time all get you that dress. Here hold on a second." She went into the store rooms and came out with a small slip on paper. On it, it said ' good for one free dress' she handed it to me. I thanked her and got on my scooter.
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Funny story!! :D
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on January 12, 2014
Lol
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on January 12, 2014
Well, it's other dimmension scootaloos life, I bet it'll happen to you too though!
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on January 12, 2014
0.0 wow what a chapter :D
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on December 15, 2013
Also in the 1st chapter when Scootaloo says "WHAT THE HELL!" She should have said "WHAT THE HAY!" (Sorry I just saw that and in a huge briny so yeah.)
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on November 27, 2013
@Golden_Owl when's the next chapter?
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on November 14, 2013
I wonder what I wanna say to Scootaloo?
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on October 26, 2013
Ooo suspense... And with me. :D:D
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on October 26, 2013
I wonder when I turn up :D
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on October 21, 2013
Wow amazing
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on October 21, 2013
Bordome not bird one
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on October 14, 2013
*facehoof* Blackstripe I write mine in hospital out of bird one now its a hobby. My next book is Warrior Cats.
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on October 14, 2013
wow, this is amazing! keep up the good work. (you might beat Flash at writing)
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on October 14, 2013
How long till the new chapter?
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on October 13, 2013
*writing
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on October 11, 2013
Lol I know I was weighting this fast
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on October 11, 2013
(:"> not to be rude) frecuently is spelt frequently
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on October 11, 2013
True... But please add a new chapter fast
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on October 11, 2013
Any kid friendly story doesn't have a cuss word in it!;)
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on October 10, 2013
OMG more! This is getting interesting fast.
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on October 09, 2013
And since I'm the writer of Pony Pals it's still Work In Progress
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on October 09, 2013
Yours is more... Kid friendly
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on October 09, 2013
Well, I wouldn't say that it's better than pony pals!
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on October 08, 2013
*mark
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on October 08, 2013
I ill uploaded a picture of u and your cutie Maek
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on October 08, 2013
More! More! This is better then my pony pals
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on October 07, 2013
I like it :)
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on October 07, 2013
B) Yeah! Oh, I had to use this pic of me because shortly before I got my cutie mark I lost my swag shades. I can't find tem anywhere!
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on October 06, 2013
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on October 06, 2013
Sorry Te appear
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on October 06, 2013
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