Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

Doubts and unexpected surprise

Doubts and unexpected surprise Angela P.O.V
I saw Liam talking to a girl with curly hair. She was very beautiful. He was checking out her arm and I saw the sparkle in his eyes. He said something and they laughed. He looked so happy with her. I looked at my ring and frowned a bit. "Miss Trees, you're awake?" "Yes." Liam saw me and stood up. "Angela!" He shouted. I saw the girl frown but I didn't care. "Liam." "How did it go?" "I feel a lot better now." "That's good." "Tell me who she is in the room, ok?" "Who?" I pointed at the girl. "Oh, um, sure." He smiled and followed me to the room. I laid on the bed and Liam sat next to me and held my hand. "Who is she?" "Um, my, my ex." "Oh. Tell me about her." "Why?" "Just tell me." "We dated for one year but I broke up when I sorta thought she was cheating on me. I was shocked when I saw her kiss him but I knew she'd never do that. She's a very nice girl who loves to dance and is trying to make her dream come true. She loves kids and she wants to have a family one day." He talked about her like he was in love. "How did you meet?" "Why the questions?" "How did you meet?" "It's a long story." "Tell me." "I'd love to." He explained me how she travelled from Liverpool all the way to London, just to be a background dancer in the Xfactor. They met while she was dancing, he was watching her and she noticed. They started chatting and then something unexpected happened. The back door of the studios opened and hundreds of fans burst in. He and Danielle ran and finally escaped when they found a hiding spot next to the toilets. They hid there for two hours because the fans wouldn't leave. Finally, the fans left and they went out. Danielle was very tired so he brought her home. She slept but woke up afterwards when she had to go back to dance. Traffic was hectic so they took the train and they had to run past thousands of fans. They made it but they were so tired. She was  late and her boss was mad but he covered for her. The next day, they exchanged phone numbers. While Liam told me the story, I couldn't help but feel jealous. He talked about her like she was the only girl in the world and she was very special or she still is. "Wow." He smiled and kissed me good night. He tucked me in and left. As he closed the door, I jumped out of bed and watched him meet up with Danielle. They smiled and laughed and walked together. I saw them exit so I went to the window where Liam offered her a ride home. He was so happy with her. Why did they ever break up? Right, she cheated. The car drove away and I stood there, holding my ring. Was I making the right choice? "Mrs. Trees. Niall Horan." Niall was panting and I watched him, wondering what was wrong. "Niall, what's wrong?" "It's Zayn, he, he's gone. I tried calling him but he never answers." I froze. "Where is he?" "I don't know. Maybe you do." "What did he say before leaving?" "That he lost and when I asked him where he was going he said I lost remember?" I ran out of the room. "Angela!" I needed to get to him. I need to stop him!
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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