Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

A person from the past

A person from the past Liam P.O.V
I took a seat in one of the chairs and checked the time. In a few hours, she'd be back. When she said yes, I felt like the luckiest man alive. She was my whole world. It was a bit stupid that I planned the wedding before and arranged everything even though she could have said no. But I knew she'd say yes. I had a feeling. Everything was planned. From the guests to the after party and honeymoon. After she says yes, the music will start. We'll dance while I sing. She'll love it. At the after party, my mates and I will sing. This is gonna be great. "Liam?" A familiar voice asked. I turned my head towards the direction of the voice and saw a young woman with curly hair. "Danielle?" "What are you doing here?" She sounded more surprised than I was. "Um.. My girfr.. My fiancée is having an operation. And you?" "Fiancée? Wow, I never thought you'd move on that fast. Right, my best friend had an accident." Oh was the only word that came out of my mouth. "So who's the lucky girl?" I guess she was trying to start a conversation. "Angela." "Oh, Angela Trees." "How do you know?" "Everyone's talking about her. She's everywhere." "She is?" "Yes. So why her? What's so special?" "She's beautiful inside and out. She's been hurt in the past and I want to be there for her. She has a cute laugh and makes me feel special. She looks at me like I'm the only boy in the world when there are billions of other men. After a hard day at work, she's there to support me. She loves me for me, not because I'm a celebrity." "I see." The silence was getting awkward. Danielle and I used to date but that was before I found out she was cheating on me with some other celebrity who was also in a boy band. "Why did you cheat on me?" I mentally slapped myself. Why did I ask that? I'm so stupid. "I never cheated on you Liam." She was lying. "I'm not lying." Did I say that out loud? "Yes." She sighed. "Look Liam, I never cheated on you. We were sorta practicing our scene for the movie." "Movie?" "Yes. Liam, I was closed to play the main character in a movie. The movie was supposed to be in London, where you were going. I wanted to surprise you but failed when you broke up with me." Everything made sense now. "Supposed?" "Yes. I dropped out of the movie after you broke up with me. I was too depressed to continue. After that, the directors couldn't find another good actress to play my role so the movie was postponed but then they found out that century fox wasn't interested anymore so they cancelled the movie." "What was the name of the movie?" "The place where we first met." "What was it about?" "How you and me met." Silence. I remember how we first met. It was a long story so I wasn't surprised that they were going to make a movie. "I wanted you to play your role but you were too busy anyways." I stared at her and saw a few cuts and marks on her arms. She saw what I was looking at and pulled down her sleeves. "Have you been cutting?" She slowly nodded. "Why?" No reply. "Was it because of me?" "Yes."
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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