Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

A normal day with Liam

Angela P.O.V
"Good morning love." A familiar voice whispered in my ear. I opened my eyes and saw Liam smiling at me. "Good morning Li." He kissed my forehead and pulled me in a hug. It was nice that Liam was here but Zayn didn't show up so I was disappointed. "What's wrong?" "Oh, um.." "Disappointed that Zayn isn't here?" How did he know? "Yes." "I'm sorry Angie, he said he wasn't in the mood. Listen Angie. There's something I need to tell you." I gulped and faked a smile. "Angela. Don't do that. Smile when you wanna smile ok? Your fake smile makes my heart break into a million pieces because I can see that you aren't happy and you're lying to me which makes me think that you don't trust me and that hurts me." "Ok." How does Liam do that? How did he know I was faking a smile? I faked a lot of smiles with Zayn but he never notices. "Look, one direction is going on a tour real soon, in one week." "Wh-what?" That means Liam won't be there to reassure me. "But... I sorta didn't want to go so they let me stay here which means I can see you everyday!" He excitedly said. "But what about the fans?" "They'll just play my part with the computer. I'm sure the fans will understand so don't worry." "Why did you do that?" I asked, still shocked. "Because I want to be with you Angie." That made me smile. "There's that smile." He joked. He pinched my cheeks and then kissed them. "Thank you Liam. For being there for me when I need you the most." We stared at each other for what felt like hours till we heard the door open. "Hey guys! How are you feeling Angela?" The boys asked. "Fine. Where's Zayn?" They shrugged. "He's having a coffee with Perrie I think." Perrie. Who's Perrie? "Perrie is a singer in a band called little mix." "Oh my gosh Liam, how do you do that?" I asked curiously. "Do what?" "Read my mind." They laughed. "You said it out loud dummy." "Well Liam, we better go, we have so much to do." Harry said and walked out. "It's so unfair! Why can't we stay too!" Niall whined. "Because Angie loves me more!" He stuck out his tongue and Niall walked away. "You break our hearts Angie. I though you were my friend." Louis fake cried and I laughed.  "You laugh about our friendship!" He faked a gasp and went out. "Bye Angie!" I grinned. "Someone's happy." He poked my cheek and I sent him a glare. "I love it when you're happy." He said in a sexy voice that sent shivers down my spine. "W-why?" Oh great, I stuttered. "Whenever you're happy I'm happy and when you're sad, I'm sad." I hugged him. "I just want you to be happy Angie." I cried softly on his shoulder. "Don't worry Li, these are happy tears. Thank you so much." I felt safer and happier with Liam but with Zayn, I didn't feel a lot. No way. Am I falling in love with Liam? "I love you Angela." He whispered. I actually felt happy when he said that. "I love you too Liam." We laid in each other's arms. I stared at the ceiling while he played with my hair. "You're so beautiful Angela." "No I'm not." "You're insecure, don't know what for. You're tuning heads when you walk through the do-o-or. Don't need makeup to cover up, being the way that you are is eno-o-ough! Everyone else in the room can see it, everyone else but you! Baby, you light up my world like nobody else! The way that you flip your hair gets me overwhelmed! But when you smile at the ground it ain't hard to tell, you don't know, oh, oh, you don't know you're beautiful!" I put my hand over his mouth. "I get it, I get it!" No one has ever sang to me. With Liam I felt special. "It's almost lunch time. What should I get you?" "Chicken curry if you don't mind? But wait, aren't I supposed to eat the hospital food." "Nope. The doctor said you could eat takeaways if you wanted but if you don't, then you can just order here." "Cool." "See you later!" He left and I felt sad. I didn't want him gone. It felt like a part of me had been torn away when he was gone. Liam was a great guy. He made me feel special, he made me happy. I watched him get in his car from the window. He saw me and waved. I waved back. Soon after, I got a text. From Liam: Missing you already xxx, so I wrote him back, To Liam: Miss you more. Two minutes later, I received another text, To Liam: I doubt you can miss me more than I miss you. I laughed. To Liam: Is that a challenge? I waited for a reply. From Liam: Maybe but I know you're gonna beat me after all, you're so tough. I rolled my eyes. To Liam: No, I'm not. From Liam: Yes you are, somebody who gets abused and raped and even shot but still smiles and laughs is definitely tough. I love you xxx A tear fell on the phone. I'm such a crybaby. To Liam: I love you too xxx, From Liam: I love you more. Before I could reply, Liam came in with delicious curry and put it on the table. "Come on, I'm hungry.
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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