Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

Jealousy

Zayn P.O.V
"Hey, we should do this another time. What do you think?" Perrie asked. "Sure. Tomorrow at ten?" "Sounds fine, see you there." She kissed my cheek and went to her car. I got in my car and was about to drive when I got a message. From Liam: Why weren't you in the hospital today? >:(   To Liam: I was busy. I took a mirror out and checked myself. My eyes were red and puffy from all the crying. Every single night I would cry myself to sleep. I could never go to that hospital. Seeing her like this makes me weak and it hurts me. From Liam: No sh*t, how was your date? Wait how did he know? To Liam: Fine.
I only went out with her to make myself busy so that I didn't need to see Angela. From Liam: Zayn, man up and come see her otherwise you won't be going on another date for long.
To Liam: Was that a threat? From Liam: Yes it was Malik now get you bum down here.
To Liam: No.  I really wanted to go, I really wanted to see her but when I do, she breaks my heart seeing her like that. She's so weak. I'm such a bad boyfriend. Wait, are we even dating?
From Liam: Get your a** down here right now Malik! She needs you! Don you care?
I do care. To Liam: Fine, I'll be there in two. I drove as fast as I could and walked in the hospital. "Good afternoon sir." A nurse softly said. "Good afternoon, I'm here for Miss Angela Trees." "Ah yes, let me bring you to her room. Follow me this way please." This nurse had a beautiful and soft voice, she'd make a perfect mother and wife. "Thank you." I took a deep breath and walked in but suddenly froze. Liam and Angela were kissing. Now my heart was really breaking. "Angela?" I said half whispering. They pulled apart and she blushed. "Oh hey mate. I best be leaving you two." He calmly walked out. When he was gone, I got mad. "Care to explain what happened?" I really wanted to punch Liam right now but I couldn't. "I, um, we, um kissed?" "No sh*t. Why Angela? Why?" "I, um.." "Why him?" "Because I love him Zayn!" She shouted. Nobody shouts at me especially not her. "Why? What does he have that I don't?" "He cares about me Zayn, he loves me for who I am! He compliments me and cancelled a tour for me just to see me everyday! But you, you never come, only now, right after a date with Perrie or whoever she is and you only came because you were forced to!" Was she serious? "I care about you Angie. I just don't like seeing you like this." "You know what Zayn? He loves me and I love him! He even asked me to be his girlfriend and you know what I said? Yes. Now go hang out with your 'girlfriend'!" That was enough. I stormed out and ran to Liam. He was sitting there, reading a magazine. "You son of a b*tch!" He saw me and I punched him. He fell on the ground. I kicked him and punched. "No! Stop! Now! Leave Liam alone!" I ignored her. He broke us. She hit my back and I turned around and grabbed her wrists. "Shut up and mind your own business." Before I knew it, Liam stood up and punched me back. He took Angela and brought her to her room. Security arrived and had me handcuffed. "F*ck you Liam!" I shouted, loud and clear. You know what? I don't care anymore. They can be together. I don't care, I really don't care.
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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