Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

Strange behavior

Strange behavior Angela P.O.V
After waking up, the boys left to eat except Liam who wasn't really hungry  and decided to stay with me. We kept staring each other, not talking. This silence was awkward, thank goodness the doctor arrived. "Mrs.Trees?" "Yes, doctor?" "I have a bit of bad news." Liam sat up straight and gave me a comforting smile. "The bullet has spread some kind of infection in your body." "What? I thought the bullet was removed?" "No, it was too deep and you were bleeding so we were focusing on getting you better, not the bullet. I'm afraid you'll have to stay longer than expected." "Ok doctor. How long will I stay here?" "We're not sure yet. About one to three months. Since we still need to do the operation but we have been so busy lately. We can only do it in one week so that means you have to stay here and be monitored. And after the operation, we need to see how your body is doing and of course, the bullet did cause damage to a few of your organs. So we still need to check that up." "O-ok." I whispered. I was a bit scared. What if I wasn't gonna make it? "Angela, everything will be fine." I held his hand and he rubbed my back. "Thank you Liam." "No problem." "Vas' Happenin'?" Zayn asked. "The bullet has spread an infection. She has to stay here longer than expected." Liam said before I got the chance to say something. "What?" Louis, Harry and Niall were surprised but Zayn's face was emotionless. "I see." Is all he said. "Louis, Harry, Niall, may I speak with you? Alone." They nodded and sat down on the bed. Liam and Zayn left. "Niall, I just wanted to say about the kiss, it never meant anything ok? It was just a friendly one since I thought you were gonna die so don't get any feelings or so because I love you like a brother, ok?" "Yeah." Niall muttered and scratched his head. Maybe I was making him uncomfortable? "Harry, I know you like me and I'm sorry to say, nothing will ever happen between us. Sorry, so pls move on?" His eyes were full of sadness and I felt bad for him but I never did have feelings for him. "I understand." I kissed his cheek. "Good, now Louis. I'm sorry about El and I hope someday you'll find the courage to move on. I heard you were falling for me when you were with El. Look, Louis if it weren't for you, I would have never found true happiness and I'm grateful to you but I don't like you in the way you like me. So there'll be nothing more than friendship." "Ok." I kissed his cheek and they left. Liam smiled at me and sat down on the chair and as for Zayn, he waved and left without saying a word. What's up with him? Did he hear our conversation? If he did, does he think I like Liam because I didn't call him in? "Li.." "We weren't eavesdropping, don't worry. But I'm worried for Zayn, he hasn't been himself lately. Ever since you're here, he's been acting strange." "Oh." "I have to go now, visiting hours are over." I felt my heart break. I'd have no one to talk to now. "Angela, I just wanted to say I'll be visiting you everyday ok? I'm just gone for the night so don't worry, I'll be back tomorrow. Bye and get some rest." He kissed my cheek and closed the door. Liam was being very supportive and sweet but Zayn has been weird. Is he jealous? No that wasn't worrying him.... It was something else. Now that I think about it, the whole time I was in the hospital, he's never talked to me. Something is definitely wrong.
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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