Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

A new danger

A new danger
Unknown P.O.V
They got in the car and started driving. I immediately followed them and making sure I didn't get caught. They stopped at a fun fair. I smirked. This was where she got kidnapped by my son. She was out of the care, shouting, laughing and jumping. I clenched my fists. How could she be so happy after she put my son in jail? He loves her but she doesn't care. I laughed when I saw her kiss another boy, Zayn. That little b*tch. Cheating on my son with another man. She's not getting away that easily. I'll make her pay for everything, including ruining my son's life. They paid for a ticket and went it. I followed carefully making sure that nobody noticed. They went on lots of rides except for that Zayn guy. He was afraid of heights. I laughed mentally at his fears. He was just pathetic. They came back, laughing and pushing each other. Zayn hugged her and they went to get some lunch. I sat down near them. I could hear their whole conversation since they were so loud. "Hey Lou, I think that girl is checking you out." She said. The guy, Lou, just rolled his eyes. "I'm still not over her ok?" I'm guessing he was talking about Eleanor. The girl, Chris killed, yeah, she was hot. "Yeah whatever. So Zayn, what do you want to do after this?" She asked and staring at him, hoping for an immediate answer. "Why don't we watch a movie after? To get our mind off things?" The boys all agreed. "I'm hungry!" A blonde hair boy said. They laughed at his comment. What was so funny? "You get something to eat. I need to use the bathroom." I smiled. This was where my son kidnapped her and that is where I'll kill her. She walked away and I followed. Stupid girl. I waited for her to be finished but she was taking long. I just stared at the door, not noticing a young boy behind me. "Hey Max, it's been a while." I knew that voice, Zayn. "Zayn. So? Settled down, have you?" "Max, leave now." He said, ignoring my question. "Sorry but I have unfinished business here." "I know you followed us. I know you want her. Dead." "How?" "I saw your car. Don't think I'm that stupid." "Well, you're stupid enough not punching me right now. You're such a stupid boy?" He was now confused. I took this as an opportunity to attack. I smashed his face to the ground. He elbowed me in the ribs and I let go. "I'm not leaving without a fight." I said feeling confident. "See you at your funeral." We fought and he kept on punching me. He had a strong fist. I, on the other hand, kicked. He coughed blood and laid on the ground, gasping for air. "Not so tough are we?" "Take another step and you're dead." I froze. Angela was pointing a gun at me. "Hey Angela." "I said Take. Another. Step. And. You're. Dead." She said, pausing at every word. "I'm afraid I can't do that sweetheart." Boom! People were screaming everywhere and I saw blood on my hands. That.... Boom! I dropped, hitting the floor hard. "Chris..." I whispered. Soon after, a few men came with guns. Zayn stood up and grabbed Angela. "Run!" The men ran after them, killing every witness in their way. I laughed. Finally, I'll get revenge. I'll make her pay.


A/N: tadadata! What will happen next? So I'm just gonna tell you the name of the next chapter. It's called: The fun fair of hell! Hahaha! Anyways, hope you enjoy! And if you guys haven't guessed yet, it's Troy's father :)
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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