Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

The Fun fair of hell

The Fun fair of hell Angela P.O.V
Zayn and I ran for our lives. Liam saw us running and panicked. "Boys, I think we need to go!" I heard him shout. "But I haven't finished my food yet!" Niall whined making Liam angry. "No Niall! We have to go, NOW!" Niall dropped his burger and the boys got up running to the exit. We stopped as we saw big men with guns guarding the exit. Sh*t. "This way!" Zayn said and we followed him to the haunted house. We just ran, looking for somewhere to hide but that was a big mistake. The boys were now gone so I think we lost them, great! "Zayn, we lost them." "What?" He turned around and looked everywhere. "Sh*t." He muttered. "You can run but you can't hide!" A man shouted. We froze. "Hide, now!" Zayn whispered. We got in the closet but it was very small so we couldn't really move. I could hear Zayn's heartbeat. "Zayn.." He put his hand on my mouth. We heard voices and people passing by but I opened the doors when I recognized the voices. "Liam, Louis, hide!" They shrugged and entered the closet. Now that we were four, we were pretty much squashed. I was in the middle and couldn't breathe properly. I felt a hand squeeze my bum and another on one my chest. "Guys, cut it out." I said. "Sorry, we can't help it, it's so small in here." Louis replied. Then I felt the hand squeeze my bum harder. "Cut it..." Boom! A gun. We heard screaming but I stopped breathing when I recognized the voices. Niall. I couldn't help it. I just opened the closet and ran to the direction of the screams. "Niall!" I bent down and ripped off a piece of my shirt. "Niall, please, don't you fail on me." He started crying. "I don't wanna die." He whispered. "You won't." I kissed his cheek. "You know, I've never kissed a girl before." I smiled. I knew he wanted me to kiss him. I kissed his warm, soft lips. "Niall, please." I wasn't gonna let him die. "Hey doll." Chris said. "Chris, please help him. I'll do anything, I'll stop running, I'll die for him, please." I pleaded. "Hmm... Are you ready to die for him?" He questioned me. "Yes." "Help him." He told one of his men. "To make it more fun, we'll show the entire world your death and they'll see the shocked expressions of their heroes, one direction." He chuckled. He took me by the hair and his men grabbed Niall. They tied me to a chair while one of the men prepared the camera. One of them came back with the boys. They gasped and Zayn fought back but a guy threatened him with a gun. The camera was ready and they started. "Good afternoon world. Today, one direction and Angela Trees have been ever so kind to join us. The camera pointed to us. "Wanna say something before leaving this world?" I cried. One direction came to me. "Niall, I'm so sorry, you almost experienced death because of me." Niall hugged me. "Thank you." He whispered. "Harry, even though we've never talked, I started liking you like a brother but I know that you see me as more. I don't have so many feelings towards you but I'll let you kiss me." He kissed me and I felt the tears coming again. "Louis, Eleanor was a wonderful girl. I'm so sorry. This is all my fault." I kissed his cheek. "Liam, thank you for being the best boyfriend. I'm sorry I wasn't a good girlfriend to you." "No Angie, you were perfect." He kissed me and I felt safe. "Zayn, I loved you and will always love you. Thank you for the best memories of my life." Zayn smiled and kissed me before crying. "Please Zayn, bad boys don't cry." Chris pushed them back and walked towards me. "Say goodbye." My heart skipped a beat. "Bye and thanks for everything." The gun felt cold against my skin. I heard a shot and screams. Goodbye guys. I will always love you.
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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