Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

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Angela P.O.V
"I hate you!" Louis slammed the door. "Babe, don't worry, he's just angry. He'll be better soon, don't worry." Zayn whispered in my ear. "No Zayn! She's dead! All because of me!" Eleanor was a wonderful woman. She was very beautiful and could wear anything, she'd still look beautiful and now she's dead. All because I came in the picture and ruined everything. I hate my life. "Angie, don't even think about cutting. It's not gonna help any of us. He just needs time alone." Zayn said, annoyance in his voice. "But she's dead Zayn! The one person whom he loves so much is gone! I ruined everything! This is all MY fault!" "Shut up and calm down!" Zayn shouted. I stopped and dropped on the floor, shaking. Zayn was never like this. This Zayn scares me. I closed my eyes when he was about to touch me. I heard him sigh and leave the room. I hate my life.
After hours of crying to myself, I finally got the courage to get out and confront Louis. I knocked on the door, hesitating at first but giving in when I heard him crying. He opened the door but wanted to close it when he saw it was me. Of course, I blocked this with my foot. "Louis, we need to talk." "No." "Louis, we need to talk now!" "Fine." He let me in and I sat down on his bed. "Louis. I'm so sorry for everything especially El. She was a wonderful girl that loved you a lot and when I say a lot I mean a lot. Whenever I go on Twitter, I always see her tweeting stuff like I miss my BooBear! Or good luck Tommo! Things that would make even me smile. I know you love her Louis but it's time for you to move on. Remember that she will always be in your heart. El loves you and wants you to be happy. She told me personally on Twitter once that if she dies, she wants you to be happy and move on so do it for her Louis. Do it for El." I left the room, knowing that'd do the trick and then went to Zayn's room. Before I could knock, he opened the door. "What do you want?" He said not looking up from his phone. "I love you Zayn and I want to be with you again." This made him look up, his jaw dropping, tears forming. He leaned in for a kiss and closed the gap. I kissed him back and we kissed for about five minutes till we heard someone cough. We pulled away, blushing like crazy. I then turned to see Liam. "Angie, you made the right choice and I'm happy for you both." He said. Man was he sweet! "Liam, I know you're hurt and I'm so sorry. I'll always love you ok? Now last kiss?" He nodded and I pecked his lips. Zayn looked jealous but smiled when I held his hand. "Angie, will you be my girlfriend?" I screamed at the top of my lungs before kissing him. "Yes! Yes!" I jumped up and down till I was tired. "Someone's happy!" Louis said.  I saw that Niall, Harry and Louis were standing, staring at me like if I was crazy. "At least we have a bit of good news. Let's celebrate. To the fun fair!" Louis shouted and then started doing superman moves. I laughed and we all got in the car. This was the best day ever!


A/N: wow! They're happy but not for long..... *smiles evilly*
So hey guys! I'm sorry but these two chapters have been quite short since I've been having writers block but I finally had another idea so good news for you! The story isn't over yet! And I've added a new character to the story! You'll see his P.O.V in the next chapter! I also wanted to say I'll be uploading lots of chapters cause I'll be in writing mode this whole weekend so let me grab a tea and start writing! Ok bye!
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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