Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Hurt. (One direction fanfic)

Angela has had a rough past and the only one keeping her together is her 'boyfriend' Troy. After breaking up with her, Angela is lost and sees a man that looks exactly like Troy but realizes it's none other than Louis Tomlinson. She meets the boys and somehow they don't really like her at first. After a few events, some of them starts growing feelings for her. Will she ever recover from her past and will she fall for one of the boys?

published on September 13, 2013not completed

Finally free!

Angela P.O.V
I woke up in a dark room with no windows. "Ah! You finally woke up!" Troy said, a bit annoyed. "Now, for the final." Huh? He opened a door and a big man entered with five boys. No it couldn't be. No, it can't. "You have the choice. Who will make it and who won't." What? "Five boys, one makes it out." No. "Troy, please no!" He laughed loudly. "I'm sorry babe." "This isn't you!" "Shut up!" And with that he punched me. "Angie!" Liam and Zayn cried. I groaned in pain. "Now, who makes it?" I was sweating. This was really hard. I didn't want any of them to die. "Troy, I choose one direction." "Ok, let me get him." Zayn and Louis laughed at his stupidity. "What's so funny? You shouldn't be laughing when you're about to die!" He kicked Louis. "Man, you're so desperate!" Louis joked and I could see the anger in Troy's eyes. "Louis stop." I said before he could say anything else. Provoking him will only result in death. "Troy, I loved you, for you but now I stopped because this isn't you anymore. What happened to that guy who protected me, never stopped thinking and worrying about me. Called me everyday at lunch just to see how I was. What happened to the Troy I loved?" He was now shaking and I could see that he was about to break down. "You were my summer love. You'll always be my summer love." I sang quietly. "I love you Angie. Why don't you love me anymore?" "Just promise me that you'll remember when the tide is grey." I continued. He couldn't anymore, he cried. "Angie! I Love you! Please be mine!" "Please don't make this harder! We can't take this any farther." I sang. "You always be my summer love!" He continued crying. "Troy, it's time for you to move on." "I know, Angie, I'm just so lonely." He whispered so I gave him a kiss on the cheek. "I will always remember you. Now please wake up and free them and me." He looked so pale and nodded quickly. After that, we were all untied. "Troy, don't run." Liam said. "They're here." Wait, who's here? "Freeze and put your hands in the air!" A man shouted, the police. "I'll always remember you Troy." I said as he was being taken away. "I'll always remember you." I said before crying. "Always."
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I am not a one direction fan at all but I like the story but could you skip a line when there is someone new talking. It is all packed together so I get confused.
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on August 17, 2015
DID NOT MEAN TO CLICK ON THIS AHHH I THOUGHT I CLICKED PERCY JACKSON STORY AGHHHHFHHFDHFDH
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on November 17, 2014
i would have gotten my sass on with zayn by now and i have almost cried a few times
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on July 09, 2014
Don't worry I almost cried in that chapter to. :( :( :( :( :( :( :'(
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on May 23, 2014
I wanted her to be whit liam
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on January 09, 2014
I've reread this a million times. Its soooooo good
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on January 05, 2014
I like it but you need to put speaking o diffreb t lines
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on November 29, 2013
how old r u ?
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on October 13, 2013
this is starting to get messed up first she goes with zayn then liam and than zayn again why cant she just stay with
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on October 13, 2013
no problem:D
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on October 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on October 12, 2013
nice story especially when zayn falls of th stairs i hate that boy he is like so annoying he says he is a muslim f**k him i hope he goes hell. i will follow you :D :D:D
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on October 12, 2013
Yeah, this story wasn't really about them, sorry, maybe in the next story, it'll be about them. :)
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on October 05, 2013
I like how at the end you explained y Harry and Niall weren't in it cause we both know I was complaining. Good story!
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on October 05, 2013
when will there be more
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on October 03, 2013
yay!
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on September 30, 2013
Don't worry, I have something reserved for Harry and Niall :)
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on September 29, 2013
that was good. I still think Niall and Harry need to be more involved. Hardly get to see them anymore. :( I think that Angie should have a chance to send Zayn to jail but she chooses not to so he gets out. Good story and hope this helped
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on September 29, 2013
Yes good idea! Ok need to write that down :D
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on September 29, 2013
haha I hear you. If you don't mind I might give you more stuff. Zayn should get mad at Liam and think that Angie is in love with him and cheating on him so Zayn goes out with Perrie. I think Niall and Harry could use a bit more involvement and Louis should go out with someone.......... what do you think
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on September 29, 2013
That's a great idea! She falls for Liam and yeah.... Stuff happens. But after your idea, I have another idea but then it will make this story longer but I guess that's a good thing for you guys lol but bad for me since I have to write it :p
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on September 28, 2013
That was good. Don't stop. You should have her get better. In the hospital Zayn can't bear to see her like this so he doesn't show up. She doesn't like this as realizes that Liam is there. She falls for her
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on September 28, 2013
Awww! Don't cry! Come let me give you a hug. *hugs*
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
I'm crying.Literally! :((
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on September 28, 2013
PLEASE
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on September 26, 2013
I MUST HAVE MORE
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
:(( so sad almost cried
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on September 26, 2013
Why:((
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on September 26, 2013
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