April

April

Hi my name is April. Everyone thinks I'm perfect, but reality check, I'm not. At school I may seem like the popular girl, but at home... My dad abuses me. No one but my best friend knows. So, when I try to commit suicide... What will happen?

published on September 06, 2013not completed

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"Can I answer tomorrow?" I asked a little nervous of making the wrong choice.
"Um, okay" she said a little suspicious. "I actually have to leave"
I began to feel like she was going to leave and never come back "where are you going?" I asked.
"I'm, um, going to go meet Mark. We're going on a date later" she said looking out the door like if she had to leave a long time ago.
"Oh, okay" I said with a smile.
We walked to the door and I stood ther waving goodbye until she was out of sight. Once she was gone, I went up to my room and did my homework. I did half of it then just started drifting off into my thoughts.
Why was Crystal being suspicious? Or was that just me? I think it was probably just my imagination.
I was interrupted by a text message from Valerie that read "Meet me @Starbucks at 5:30"
Should I go or make up an excuse? I decided to respond by saying "sry can't go. Got 2 much HW"  even though I was done with all of it and had nothing to do.
She replied in like 2.5 seconds saying "It's an emergency" with like fifteen exclamation marks.
I'm just gonna go, not tell her not tell dad I'm leaving. So, I did. I went to Starbucks and sat in the booth closest to the door. I sat there for 5 minutes until she walked in.
"I thought you were busy" she said sitting down.
"I finished then, I came" I lied. "So, what was the emergency?" I asked.
She pulled out her white book bag and looked through. She took out, notebooks, folders, pencils, pens and her phone until she got what she was looking for. She put a note in front of me and said "read this, it's from Crystal"


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on May 07, 2014
i love this story
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on December 30, 2013
I love it! Btw I thnk she should move in with crystal!
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on December 18, 2013
You leave with crystal!
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on October 28, 2013
Oh can Nway read this?? Plz
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on October 17, 2013
Gisselle really you totally need to keep on writing this story! It is incredibly good.
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on October 17, 2013
This is amazing
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on October 15, 2013
Updated! 2 new chapters!
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on October 14, 2013
Wow u never told me you write so good! I know you write but not this good. BTW I stop tellin me u don't write good cuz u do. Oh n has Nway read this story already? If not tell er to read it. She is totally gonna love it. Not as much as I love it though.
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on October 14, 2013
I luv ur story
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on September 26, 2013
Thanks :)
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on September 25, 2013
Can't wait to read more! You write amazing stories!
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on September 25, 2013
Chapter 6 should be posted by Monday at the latest
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on September 20, 2013
I'm thinking of ending this soon. How many chapters do you guys think I should make it up to?
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on September 13, 2013
Its not the dad
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on September 11, 2013
*Gasps* I think I know what will happen!
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on September 11, 2013
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on September 10, 2013
I think she should leave but there should be some crazy twist in the story
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on September 10, 2013
LEAVE!!
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on September 09, 2013
I think she should leave but then regret it because her sister is actually a criminal and Crystal's boyfriend rapes her.
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on September 09, 2013
Cool story, my name is April!
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on September 09, 2013
Chapter 4 is posted!
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on September 09, 2013
:) nice story
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on September 06, 2013
It's a nice story, a little bit like another story I know but I love it! :)
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on September 06, 2013
Wows, this is a hit! Keep writing, this is one of the bests!
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on September 06, 2013
more more more. what happen to April's mother? what what what? please make chapter three or Nother story pwezz pwezz pwezz. I'm more desperate than another in the world!
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on September 06, 2013
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on September 06, 2013
Pwezz more 0.0
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on September 06, 2013
Its called "through a little girl's eyes by xxangelxx. It's reallygood !!!
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on September 06, 2013
More please!
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on September 06, 2013
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