Hey!i'm Jean,Jean Gossimer I come from I small town.I moved to New York and started going to school in Hollywood Arts.Hollywood Arts is a special school for teens with special talents.This is about me going from geek to Goddess
Hey i'm Jean Gossimer I come from a small town in Minnesota.I was in the football team.I have black hair and brown eyes.I moved to NYC a year ago.My 2 best friends are Lexa and Sophia.Were not really popular.I wear glasses and I am one of those geeks in the school.I always dreamed of being cool but I knew it would never happen.
Well, um, I don't like being mean, so I'm just going to give advice: Make it linger, and make this just an introduction to yourself and the Prologue. Add a conflict through another character, add dialogue, a plot, a twist (maybe something like YOU"RE the bad character or something) then wrap it up with either a death or a happy ending, depends on how you like See More to roll. Make the next chapters longer and include descriptive language like similes (comparing something to something else), metaphors (stating directly that something IS something else), and personification (describing inanimate objects as if they were living things). Hope this helps you with this story or any further stories you might write. ;) -ArtemisMoon91904
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