Mobian Girls

Mobian Girls

Camille and her companion assistant, Wolfie discovers a magical mirror that transfer them to a planet Earth, where humans roam. There, she meets her humanized friends and a wicked teenage wreckage, named Kameo, who always finds ways to destoy the life of Camille.

published on February 27, 2015not completed

Human discoveries

Camille: *Enters, still annoyed that a fourth grader out-smarted her, then hears a argument*
???: You idiot!
??: I-i'm sorry! P-please f-forgive me!
???: Forgive YOU?! No! You touched my crown!
??: I d-didn't t-touch it!
???: And you're calling me a lie?!
Camille: *Growls* And who do she think she is? Taking MY crown and insulting them for it?!
Wolfie: *Hamster growl*
Camille: *Goes over to her* Ahem? Who do you think you are?
???: Whoever you are, you better beat it.
Camille: And whoever you are, you better leave that girl alone!
??: *Whimpers*
Camille: I'm not leaving until I know why you're doing this.
???: Listen up, geek. I am the school president and the most hottest girl in here, so If were you, you better move!
Camille: *Doesn't move* Hmph... >:)
???: So you want a challenge? *Jumps up for a punch but falls when Camille dodges*
??: *Hides in a corner*
???: Hnngh! BOYS?!
*Two boys pick her up. One looks like Shadow, the other looks like Scourge. Scourge brushes her off*
???: I am so done with this school! Scourge! Shadow! Get me out of here!
*Scourge and Shadow takes her away as the girl raspberries them both*
Camille: *Goes up to the hiding girl and touches her shoulder* Are you okay?
??: *Sniffles* Yes...
Camille: Whats your name?
??: Lana...
Camille: O_O
Lana: ?
Camille: ^-^U Nothing...anyways nice name.
Lana: *Looks down shyly*
Wolfie: *Gets out Camille's pocket*
Camille: *Panics in the inside*
Lana: 8D OMG! A HAMSTER! *Ruffles his fur*
Camille: Yes...my hamster.
Lana: What is he doing here?
Camille: He just follows me around..but hes a good friend.
Lana: *Digs in her pocket and hands Wolfie hamster treats*
Wolfie: *Sniffs the treats and eats one, then stuffs them all in his cheeks*
Lana: ^-^ So cute!
Camille: *Snatches him up* OK! *Ahem* Ok...my hamster is VERY tired and he needs his rest.
Wolfie: *Folds arms and grunts grumpily*
Camille: *Big smile* Bye! *Quickly runs off*
Lana: Um, bye? *Carries her things, gets up and hurries to next class*
Camille: *Looks around*
Human Christina: Showing off her dress in a farther view*
Human Jackie: *Rolls eyes*
Human Kitty: *Comes derping around with grape juice*
Human Christina: D:< You little...
Human Snoop: *Holds her back*
Human Kitty: *Squee*
Camille: This school may not be the best place to stay in...*Hurries to the library*
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on June 26, 2015
This is amazing! I haven't read a story this funny for ages XD
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on May 18, 2015
Awesome!!!
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on March 19, 2015
Oh wow cool!
When am I appearing?
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Soon!
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on March 14, 2015
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on March 14, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
XD
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Yep, So Wolfie's a hamster! And Tails just told Camille off. XD
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Idk I can't really decide
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on March 06, 2015
BTW, what was the best part?
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on March 06, 2015
Oh hell yes
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on March 06, 2015
@SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
You love puns, do you?
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on March 06, 2015
I have a feeling sh*ts about to get real! (Pun intended)
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
Awesome I wonder what Shara gonna be like X3 when cam tell her(cam's)that her crown is missing!
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on March 03, 2015
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on March 03, 2015
Lol. Love the new chap!
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Its not boring? I was even bored writing it!
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on March 03, 2015
You already know that I play Spike, right?
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on March 03, 2015
Nah! I enjoyed it!
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on March 03, 2015
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on March 03, 2015
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on March 03, 2015
Such an amazing story!
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Thanks.
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Your welcome!
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on March 01, 2015
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on March 01, 2015
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on March 01, 2015
Yes!!!!!!!X3 Shara is so random!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT SO!!!!!!!
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on March 01, 2015
LOL!
Guessing I'm not in this yet because I'm in Scorchia?
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yeah.
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I'm thinking of a good cameo appearance.
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on February 28, 2015
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on February 28, 2015
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on February 28, 2015
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on February 28, 2015
Awesome!
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on February 27, 2015
Love it!
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Thanks, sorry for the delay, I was trying to find a good start of the story.
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Nah! Don't kill yourself over it! Its an awesome start!
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on February 27, 2015
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on February 27, 2015