Mobian Girls

Mobian Girls

Camille and her companion assistant, Wolfie discovers a magical mirror that transfer them to a planet Earth, where humans roam. There, she meets her humanized friends and a wicked teenage wreckage, named Kameo, who always finds ways to destoy the life of Camille.

published on February 27, 2015not completed

You had it, so retrieve it.

Shara: What, what, WHAT?! O.O
Griffin: Okay, let me get this straight...who could steal a crown?
Sky: I would! :3
Everyone: -_-
Sky: *Clears throat* Yeah, who would want a heap of metal anyways? -.-
Swift: When did you see this, Camille?
Wolfie: I saw the whole thing, actually.
Griffin: What?!
Swift: And you done nothing about it?
Wolfie: It was 10pm at night...I only saw when she ran away with it and she hit this here mirror! *Points to it*
Shara: I don't think someone would jump in a mirror. Wait, CAN IT HAPPEN?
Camille: Someone did say its a magical mirror...*Steps up* Guys, I'm going to retrieve my crown!
Swift: What?! No! We're all going!
Shara: IN THE POWER OF FRIENDSHIP! :D
*Everyone nods*
Camille: No, stay back. I'm going after it and thats final.
*Takes a breath, hesitates,  backs up and takes a leap*
Wolfie: .....Don't worry, Camile! I'm coming!
Griffin: ARE YOU OUTTA YOUR MIND?!
Wolfie: *Leaps in*
Lana: ....Oh my...
Shara: NOOOOOOOOOOO! Camille....Wolfie........GONE! DX
Everyone: *Looks at Shara* O_O
Shara: What? I was gonna ask them to try my cherry cupcakes!


Camille: *Falls out of portal* Oof...
*Faints, then hears a familiar voice*
???: Camille! Psst! Wake up!
Camille: Ugh...Wolfie?......WOLFIE?!
*Not visible, just his voice*
???: Yeah, you know who it is!
Camille: Where are you?!
Wolfie: *Finally appears but hes a hamster* Sup?
Camille: What the- You're a hamster!!!
Wolfie: I sure do know what I am but...*Sniffs Camille* What are you?
Camille: A hedgehog. Thats what I am! Now stop playing your silly games!
Wolfie: *Scampers around Camille* Oh no you aren't! Take a second look!
Camille: *Looks at herself* My gloves! My clothes!....MY HAIR! DX
Wolfie: Cha-ching! You've changed! Change is GOOD.
Camille: Change is BAD! *Carries Wolfie* How are you happy to be a hamster?!
Wolfie: Err...I'm petite, plump and fluffeh....to the max!
Camille: Well guess what? Let me find this crown so I can become a hedgehog again and get outta here.
Wolfie: You're gonna learn to love it!
Camille: Sometimes, I wonder why I even carry you around....*Shoves him to a pocket*
Wolfie: Hey! *Grooms fur*Calm down! Besides! I know where we can start searching.
Camille: Yes?
Wolfie: *Points* Ahem, the school?
Camille: Good. Lets go. *Tries to concentrate and fly but nothing happens*
Human Tails: Um, are you okay?
Camille: I'm flying!
Human Tails: You're not leaving the ground! :/
Camille: .....Fine, I might've lost my flying ability but I still got my chao blast! *Walks up to the door* CHAO BLAST! *Holds out hand and nothing happens*
Human Tails: Have you ever tried walking up the steps and push the door open? Geez, you're awkward...*Goes inside the school*
Camille: *Grunts* -_-
Wolfie: *Snickers*
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on June 26, 2015
This is amazing! I haven't read a story this funny for ages XD
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on May 18, 2015
Awesome!!!
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on March 19, 2015
Oh wow cool!
When am I appearing?
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Soon!
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on March 14, 2015
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on March 14, 2015
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on March 14, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
XD
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Yep, So Wolfie's a hamster! And Tails just told Camille off. XD
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Idk I can't really decide
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on March 06, 2015
BTW, what was the best part?
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on March 06, 2015
Oh hell yes
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on March 06, 2015
@SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
You love puns, do you?
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on March 06, 2015
I have a feeling sh*ts about to get real! (Pun intended)
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
Awesome I wonder what Shara gonna be like X3 when cam tell her(cam's)that her crown is missing!
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on March 03, 2015
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on March 03, 2015
Lol. Love the new chap!
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Its not boring? I was even bored writing it!
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on March 03, 2015
You already know that I play Spike, right?
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on March 03, 2015
Nah! I enjoyed it!
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on March 03, 2015
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on March 03, 2015
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on March 03, 2015
Such an amazing story!
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Thanks.
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Your welcome!
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on March 01, 2015
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on March 01, 2015
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on March 01, 2015
Yes!!!!!!!X3 Shara is so random!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT SO!!!!!!!
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on March 01, 2015
LOL!
Guessing I'm not in this yet because I'm in Scorchia?
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yeah.
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I'm thinking of a good cameo appearance.
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on February 28, 2015
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on February 28, 2015
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on February 28, 2015
Awesome!
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on February 27, 2015
Love it!
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Thanks, sorry for the delay, I was trying to find a good start of the story.
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Nah! Don't kill yourself over it! Its an awesome start!
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on February 27, 2015
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on February 27, 2015