new girl

new girl

well when i came to the pheonix from Paris France I didn't quite fit in the school kids were bullying me this story is about my life P.S I will use FAKE names if you have the same name as what I mention remember that I did not know that was your name

published on June 06, 2013completed

mean girls

mean girls
when someone passed me a note at school it said "meet me in the girls bathroom at recess" when I went there I saw two girls with makeup and clothes and jeweleryand they gave me magizinesand when I went back in the classroom one girl asked me what happend to me I told her "NONE OF YOUR BUISNESS" that girl was samantha I betrayed her I was sooo mean so I told the mean girls off I told the teacher about the populars she expelled the three mean girls and the next day at school I was talking to Samantha I said "will we still be friends?" and she said "are you still mean?" and we were friends again THE END
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That was really.... Rushed. It didn't make sense. You did not use full paragraphs or anything. It has a great story line and everything, it just needs work. :) NO ONE CAN TELL ME THIS IS HATE BECAUSE IT IS CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM THANK YOU VERY MUCH.
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on November 22, 2013
do not worry I will add more
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on June 08, 2013
the story was kind short :/ It would be better if it were longer
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on June 08, 2013
I know right I was so mean to everyone til I found out it was wrong
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on June 06, 2013
It was good that those girls werre gone, and I'm glad you and 'Samantha' are friends again P.S I think France is AWSOME, I dont get why people would bully in the firt place!
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on June 06, 2013