Slave part 2

Slave part 2

Hi this is because of all the commenters asking for more. Next is about the running away

published on May 28, 2013completed

Tortue

Tortue Jace comes in with a knife, I freeze. What is he doing with a knife in his hand. He wants revenge and this is how he is going to do it. He comes over an d whispers in my ear "Your gonna pay,"
I start to wriggle and he grabs my neck. Then he brings the knife up to my neck. He cuts and lets the blood dribble into a egg cup. When it is full he brings his lips to mine and brings his teeth hard on my lip. He Bites it until it bleeds then goes out of the room. I cant even put a hand on the wound. The pain is not just in my neck but pulses in my heart

The next day, the blood has dried and is mildly painful. My lips are dry and taste like blood. I stare ahead and wince when the door opens. A boy around my age looks in and sees me. He quickly looks away and shuts the door. Must be one of his friends. I hear Jace's voice coming through the walls. They go out and my only hope of excaping goes aswell.

Jace comes in with the same knife and I start screaming begging his Dad will come in. He comes up to me and places a hand on my mouth. I stop moving as the knife comes to my shoulder just down from the neck wound and cuts. This cut is longer and brings anouther wave of pain. I scream in agony and he just watches with a satisfactory look on his face.
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I think the ending was...disappointing...
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on February 20, 2015
SAD but a great story!
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on June 18, 2014
So sad );
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on April 25, 2014
I wrote the 2nd chapter for her to use! I'm so happy!!
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on February 09, 2014
So awesome! :D
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on January 04, 2014
plus aaaww it ended. GOOD STORY THOUGH
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on December 10, 2013
yay you chose my idea!!:D
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on December 10, 2013
Sorry guys its finished
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on November 27, 2013
WRITE A BOOK GOD GLAMMIT
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on November 09, 2013
Sorry i cant think of anything more
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on October 23, 2013
make more wat happens next!!!!!!! write a friggin book!!!!!!!!:D
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on October 23, 2013
I won't say it again but MORE!!!!!!!
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on July 30, 2013
Awesome please make more
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on July 09, 2013
love it
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on June 30, 2013
More :P
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on June 21, 2013
For real please make more!!!
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on June 16, 2013
Ok this is a really good story!!! :D
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on June 15, 2013
MORE! Come on please add more more more more more MORE just add more plz.
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on June 15, 2013
please add more! :D
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on May 31, 2013
great so far! :)
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on May 30, 2013
But he tracks her and locks her in a dark cold room with no bed! How is that not treated like a slave? That's worse then most slaves!
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on May 28, 2013