Five Nights of Fear

Five Nights of Fear

This is a story about the paranormal. Paranormal is my specialty so I hope you like it. This is about me and my friend Taylor staying five nights in a haunted room in a hotel. This is not a true story. This is all fiction. Thank you to those that Read this.

published on May 22, 2013not completed

"No Problems"

I woke up the next morning at about nine. Taylor was still asleep. I figured I would wait for her to wake up. Then we would go find out what was wrong with the room.
Taylor woke up about ten minutes later. She looked at me.
"What are you doing?" She asked me.
"I was waiting for you to wake up," I replied. "So we can go find out whats wrong with the bathroom."
Taylor went into the bathroom to get dressed.
"Anthony," She said. "Come look at this."
I went into the bathroom. The tub, sink, and toilet were filled to the top with water.
"I was just in here five minutes ago and this wasn't here," I told her.
"Probably just happend," Taylor said.
"But I didn't hear the any water running," I explained.
"Maybe it came up from the drain," Taylor suggested.
Taylor went ahead and got dressed in the bathroom. I made our beds while I waited on her. When she was ready, we went to the lobby.
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We went to the desk. The woman there, her name tag said "Milly Malice", turned to us.
"Hello," She said. "How can I help you?"
"There is a problem with our bathroom," I told her. "We got lights turning on and off and the toilet, tub, and sink turning on by themselves."
"I'll send the plumber up with you," She replied.
She pressed a buzzer and a man walked out of the back. He had ovealls and a flannel shirt on. We led him to our room and to the bathroom. When we got there... The sink, toilet, and tub were empty and they worked fine.
After a half and hour, the plumber said that there was nothing wrong.
"You guys are crazy," he said.
He then left us in the room. We had no idea what was going on.
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W o w .
My name is Taylor. Shit.
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on July 04, 2016
Wow this is good! but it does seem rushed. But I kinda rush too idk how. Make more please
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on July 25, 2015
im freaking shacking but i love it make more
:-O
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on July 15, 2015
Yesss!!!! Continue!!!!
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on March 30, 2015
Please continue!!!
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on September 20, 2014
wow is this a true story?
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on June 05, 2013
You should totally slow down but it was good. :)
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on May 22, 2013
As a reader, this is good, but it seems rushed, and I think it should have more "emotion" and "Feeling" to give the reader chills down their spine and have them scared. This is suppose to be a paranormal story, have your readers a little scared to give the goosebumps, but other than that I think you should put more emotion in it, but overall, it's good.
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on May 22, 2013
yeah, kinda like the paranormal activity movies where the activity gets worse each night. and the final night will be hell
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on May 22, 2013
I like how the paranormal doesnt all happen at once... are you going to like, have it build up as the story goes?
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on May 22, 2013