Five Nights of Fear

Five Nights of Fear

This is a story about the paranormal. Paranormal is my specialty so I hope you like it. This is about me and my friend Taylor staying five nights in a haunted room in a hotel. This is not a true story. This is all fiction. Thank you to those that Read this.

published on May 22, 2013not completed

"Night Two"

It was about midnight and I heard a sound coming from the bathroom. I just laid in my bed as still as I could. What I heard sounded like footsteps. Like someone was using the bathroom. I looked at Taylor, who was awake and scared.
"Do you hear that?" She whispered.
"Yeah," I replied. "Its co-"
Suddenly, the door to the bathroom was slammed shut. It made Taylor and I both jump.
I got up and slowly walked over to the bathroom door. I grabbed the knob and tried to turn it. It wouldn't budge. It was locked from the inside.
"I can't open it," I told Taylor. "It is locked."
Taylor got up and went to grab the knob. I let go and the door flew open by itself. I turned the light on, and no one was in the bathroom. It was empty and clean. No prints... nothing. No trace of anyone ever being there.
"What the heck is going on?" Taylor asked. "This is really freaking me out."
"I am not sure," I replied. "This is all so strange."
"We need to find out the history to this place," Taylor said. "Because it seems haunted."
"We will go to the library in the morning to find some information," I said.
So we waited out the night. We didnt get much sleep that night at all.
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W o w .
My name is Taylor. Shit.
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on July 04, 2016
Wow this is good! but it does seem rushed. But I kinda rush too idk how. Make more please
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on July 25, 2015
im freaking shacking but i love it make more
:-O
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on July 15, 2015
Yesss!!!! Continue!!!!
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on March 30, 2015
Please continue!!!
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on September 20, 2014
wow is this a true story?
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on June 05, 2013
You should totally slow down but it was good. :)
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on May 22, 2013
As a reader, this is good, but it seems rushed, and I think it should have more "emotion" and "Feeling" to give the reader chills down their spine and have them scared. This is suppose to be a paranormal story, have your readers a little scared to give the goosebumps, but other than that I think you should put more emotion in it, but overall, it's good.
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on May 22, 2013
yeah, kinda like the paranormal activity movies where the activity gets worse each night. and the final night will be hell
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on May 22, 2013
I like how the paranormal doesnt all happen at once... are you going to like, have it build up as the story goes?
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on May 22, 2013