Five Nights of Fear

Five Nights of Fear

This is a story about the paranormal. Paranormal is my specialty so I hope you like it. This is about me and my friend Taylor staying five nights in a haunted room in a hotel. This is not a true story. This is all fiction. Thank you to those that Read this.

published on May 22, 2013not completed

"Night One"

It was about one in the morning when I woke up to go to the bathroom. Taylor was asleep in her bed.
When I got up, I noticed that the bathroom light was on. I knew that Taylor had turned it off before we went to bed. I thought maybe she woke up for the bathroom and left the light on.
After I went to the bathroom, I turned off the light. As I was walking out of the bathroom, the sink turned on. I turned and got the chills. The room suddenly got really cold. I walked over to the sink and turned it off. I went to walk away, and it turned on again.
"What the fudge noodles?" I asked myself, yes I said "fudge noodles."
I tried to turn it off again, but it wouldn't budge this time. Finally, it shut off by itself.
I turned to see Taylor and I jumped.
"You scared me," I said.
"Sorry," She replied. "What's going on?"
"The sink is turning on and off by itself," I replied. "I think this room is haunted."
"Thats nonsence," Taylor said. "Probably just a plumbing problem. Lets get it checked out in the morning."
"Ok," I said. "You're probably right."
"Duh," Taylor said with a smile. "I'm a woman, I'm always right."
We both laughed and went back to bed.
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W o w .
My name is Taylor. Shit.
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on July 04, 2016
Wow this is good! but it does seem rushed. But I kinda rush too idk how. Make more please
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on July 25, 2015
im freaking shacking but i love it make more
:-O
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on July 15, 2015
Yesss!!!! Continue!!!!
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on March 30, 2015
Please continue!!!
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on September 20, 2014
wow is this a true story?
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on June 05, 2013
You should totally slow down but it was good. :)
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on May 22, 2013
As a reader, this is good, but it seems rushed, and I think it should have more "emotion" and "Feeling" to give the reader chills down their spine and have them scared. This is suppose to be a paranormal story, have your readers a little scared to give the goosebumps, but other than that I think you should put more emotion in it, but overall, it's good.
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on May 22, 2013
yeah, kinda like the paranormal activity movies where the activity gets worse each night. and the final night will be hell
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on May 22, 2013
I like how the paranormal doesnt all happen at once... are you going to like, have it build up as the story goes?
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on May 22, 2013