an unexpected event

an unexpected event

in this story a girl called emerald gets hit by a car and ends up in a coma, but when she is in the coma, something happens, something unexplained and unexpected...

published on June 04, 2013completed

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marie was half asleep on the waiting room chair as the doctor came in.
marie jumped up, 'is she ok?'
'we cant say at the moment, but she seems to be stable.'
emeralds mom burst through the door and ran over to marie, 'is she ok?'
'they dont know,' marie stammered, 'im so upset, it was all my fault, if i had...'
'honey, it wasent your fault, you didnt know the car was coming... what did they say the speed was?'
'150mph.'
'oh...'
'im scared, will she be ok?'
'yes.. im sure she will.'
'mrs dutch, i presume?' a vocie echoed from behind them
'yes, is emerald ok?'
a doctor walked out from the corridor behind them 'dr. jones, my nameis. unfortanatly, emerald is in a state of emergancy, a coma...'
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That Was So Emotional it made me sad but I was happy when she woke up good story :(( :)
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Thanks! I was only 13 then though so it could be better...
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on August 31, 2013
in chapter 7 it supposd 2 b voice not ocie soz every1
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on June 04, 2013