an unexpected event

an unexpected event

in this story a girl called emerald gets hit by a car and ends up in a coma, but when she is in the coma, something happens, something unexplained and unexpected...

published on June 04, 2013completed

though Marie's eyes!

AAAAAAGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Marie felt the world was going in slow Mode, her mind was running as fast as she could to push emerald out the way but her body felt like it was frozen, she could she emerald twist and fall to the side. Marie reached emerald and saw her postbox red hair spread out like a fan on the road, as Marie turned her round her sea blue eyes were wide open but there was no spark in them, they were lifeless,  lifeless and dead. there was no joky attitude like before, now there was just, nothing.
'oh my god' Marie heard a voice behind her, she turned.  it was a women aged about 23 and she had frantically opened her phone and was dialling 999. Marie got out emeralds phone from her pocket and flipped through the contacts until she came to 'mom'
she pressed ring. emeralds mom answered it, as Marie let everything pour out the police and ambulance arrived.
'wait, I'm going with her!' Marie shouted after the ambulance. as she clambered into the ambulance she hung up, put the phone back in emeralds pocket and pulled out her own instead.
'mom, I'm on my way to the hospital... no I'm fine but emeralds been knocked over... no you don't need to come I'll be fine, OK see you tomorrow'
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That Was So Emotional it made me sad but I was happy when she woke up good story :(( :)
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Thanks! I was only 13 then though so it could be better...
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on August 31, 2013
in chapter 7 it supposd 2 b voice not ocie soz every1
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on June 04, 2013