an unexpected event

an unexpected event

in this story a girl called emerald gets hit by a car and ends up in a coma, but when she is in the coma, something happens, something unexplained and unexpected...

published on June 04, 2013completed

phoning!

'are you sure she's OK?' asked Mrs Dutch nervessly
'yes I'm sure, she's usually late, although, I'm going to have a little talk with her'answered Mr Dutch
RING, RING, RING, RING Mrs Dutch jumped as the sound of the phone startled her
'see, that might be her.'
'excuse me, is that emeralds mom?'
'yes it is, who is this?'
'its Marie, there's been an accident...'
Mrs Dutch hung up the phone and burst into tears.
'oh darling, what's wrong honey' Mr Dutch comforted.
'emerald, she's been hit by a car.' mrs dutch sounded strangeled, 'she was on her way home an ran on to the road by mistake and the car was going too fast, shes on her way to the hospital now.'
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That Was So Emotional it made me sad but I was happy when she woke up good story :(( :)
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Thanks! I was only 13 then though so it could be better...
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on August 31, 2013
in chapter 7 it supposd 2 b voice not ocie soz every1
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on June 04, 2013