DIARY OF A WIMPY KID (FRIENDS)

DIARY OF A WIMPY KID (FRIENDS)

guys I'm so sorry for the book diary of a wimpy girl this time I spend 7 hours so I hope i don't make and mistakes

published on April 26, 2013completed

friends

friends
9:00 school time
It was school and I met some new friends  called : Emma and Emily  and they were so lovely <3
we started meeting evreyday and having sleepovers

and after 2 years we were really best friends , but then my 2 best friends moved school , I was really SAD :(
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I'm sorry, this story sucks...
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on May 09, 2015
Good job working on grammar, capitalization, spelling, and punctuation. I would work a bit on spelling, if I were you. All in all, I guess this was a lot better than the first one! :D
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on April 16, 2015
Don't give up! Now's the time for looking at inspiration! Look at other Qfeast stories! Make it exciting be looking around Qfeast. But just be you when you find inspiration and make/remake a story.
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on December 27, 2013
:( It was short because when My mother read it she said it was fine as long as I don't add boring words
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on May 14, 2013
Well what can I say
very short
pointless
a very bad version compared to jeff kinney
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on April 28, 2013