DIARY OF A WIMPY KID (FRIENDS)

DIARY OF A WIMPY KID (FRIENDS)

guys I'm so sorry for the book diary of a wimpy girl this time I spend 7 hours so I hope i don't make and mistakes

published on April 26, 2013completed

DIDEN'T

When Emma and Emily left , now I'm bullied by some kids at school and their pulling my hair, breaking my pencil , call me names and one day I actually went to emma's house and her mother told me that she moved school because she diden't like the school anymore .
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I'm sorry, this story sucks...
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on May 09, 2015
Good job working on grammar, capitalization, spelling, and punctuation. I would work a bit on spelling, if I were you. All in all, I guess this was a lot better than the first one! :D
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on April 16, 2015
Don't give up! Now's the time for looking at inspiration! Look at other Qfeast stories! Make it exciting be looking around Qfeast. But just be you when you find inspiration and make/remake a story.
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on December 27, 2013
:( It was short because when My mother read it she said it was fine as long as I don't add boring words
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on May 14, 2013
Well what can I say
very short
pointless
a very bad version compared to jeff kinney
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on April 28, 2013