Red Mist

Red Mist

Liesel is fighting. Her face is as pale as snow. Her hair is as black as coal. Her lips as red as blood. She is a single rose in the midst of a war. And she will fight. Oh, she will fight.

published on November 15, 2012not completed

Running

Branches snapped back, the wind howled as the eight year old girl ran desperately through the trees, cuts running down her pale arm.
"Stop it!" she shouted, still running. Someone was behind her, her senses were telling her. Her senses were always right. "Stop it now!" Her pursuer stopped suddenly and curiosity got the better of her. Swinging round, she saw the pale figure staring at her.
"Who are you?" she asked the boy, staring at her. His hair was fair and ruffled. His eyes were blue and shining. His smile was crooked and wonky.
"Did I scare you?" he grinned.
"No."
"I did. You were shouting," he insisted.
"No you didn't. Go away."
"But I want to be your friend."
"I don't want to be yours."
"Aw shucks, that's too bad."
"Leave me alone." Liesel said and started running again. But he reached out and grabbed her arm. Liesel didn't like this. She thrashed out and saw the boy withdraw his arm and nurse it.
"I'm going now so don't follow me. My senses can tell if you are and I will get Quane to make you leave me alone."
"Who?"
"He's a soldier."
"My dad is."
Liesel cursed herself for letting that small sign of pity slip through her eyes.
"Not my problem," she said quickly and instantly regretted it. He scowled at her and turned around to hide his sorrow.
"I'm sorry, I didn't mean-"
"You really don't know how to make friends do you?" he spat and stomped off. Liesel, biting her lip turned around and continued walking.

It was soon dark and her legs ached. Her throat was sore and she would occasionally whimper when all the blood pressure ran to her foot. She staggered and twisted strangely, trying to keep her balance in walking but her head was hurting badly. Something rustled quietly in the wind and she spun around to see what. It started again but this time, from behind her. Again, she twisted her head over her shoulder to see what was causing it. She missed her footing and tripped down a hill, rolling in leaves and mud. Her knee bashed against her chin and she tried to feel for the blood but she was traveling to fast. She reached the bottom with a shriek and felt fresh blood by her tooth. Her leg wouldn't respond to what her brain was begging to do, stand up and walk on. She clutched a small branch and pulled herself up with this, straining her leg muscles. Leaning against the tree for support, she gently massaged her vitiated leg until the pain dulled. She pulled herself forward and pulled herself up into the tree. Slowly, she crept up and sat herself in a perched position with a birds-eye view. She could see the fire, still resisting aborting attempts to be smothered. She could smell the smoke, rising gently into the air. She could feel the soft wind whipping her hair into her face. She could hear gunshots and more anguished, pained screams. She blocked her ears and squeezed her eyes shut so she didn't have to face anymore of the death. She had to keep going. She had to  keep running.
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Aww she quit we'll never hear the end :((
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on July 17, 2013
Brilliant!
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on May 09, 2013
Wow, you're amazing
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on April 30, 2013
this is amazing, and im being truthful. brillisnt. pure genious
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on April 07, 2013
I Love this story when is the rest (it's amazing I love this story )
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on March 18, 2013
this is really good. i reccomend it
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on March 11, 2013
moreeeee!!! lol
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on February 14, 2013
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on December 17, 2012
wowowowowowowowowow THIS IS INCREDIBLE I LOVEEEEEEEE IT
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on December 04, 2012
Oh. It was a draw. Ah well!
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on December 04, 2012
Things are getting good...
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on December 01, 2012
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on November 30, 2012
OOOH I WANNA WHO WINS THIS RACE!!
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on November 28, 2012
wow! :)
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on November 22, 2012
Awsome!!! Hahaha i loved it!
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on November 20, 2012
Awesome! Fab story!
I also agree with Leigh07
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on November 19, 2012
Wow, this is incredible!!! I love it, Congratulations. It's written in a really dedicated and detailed way, Love it!
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on November 18, 2012
They way you wrote it, amazing!! I love the details!! And she is pretty wise, and a smart-mouth for being 8...
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on November 16, 2012
Super cool story!:)
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on November 16, 2012