Chapter 32- Bad Tidings
I stood, my mind blank.Did Scra- Azriel just kiss my cheek..?
What was going on?
Still confused, my thoughts turned to Solus. Something was going on, and I should warn him at the very least.
I did up my hair in my usual ponytail then stepped outside. There was a tension in the air, like something bad was going to happen.
I hurried to his house, knowing the way by memory, but stopped as I saw a shadow on the ground around me. I looked up and saw him in the sky, flying and diving around in a flurry. He looked happy.
"Solus!" I shouted, cupping my hands around my mouth to carry the sound. He didn't hear me, so I shouted again.
He stopped and looked down at me. Then he dove swiftly down only to land gracefully in front of me.
"Oh hey ash. How are you?"
"I feel like somethings going on. Scratch came to me last night and-"
"He did what?" I felt Solus's mood change instantly. He looked guarded.
"Its not what you think. He's good. I mean, he told me a lot of things and-"
"What did he tell you exactly?"
I felt my mind race for a answer. Why was I so stupid? I couldn't tell Solus of what he told me. It was Solus's past after all. He might get suspicious.
"I... Can't say."
"Please try."
"Its personal."
Solus sighed. and tucked a hand in his pocket.
"Ok then... Why do you think something bad is going to happen?"
"Because Azriel acted like something was happening out of nowhere."
"Azriel?"
"Scratch. Listen its complicated-"
Suddenly a loud boom erupted in the distance. Solus shoved me behind him.
"What was that?" I asked. Solus ignored me and listened carefully, tense.
When nothing seemed to happen he relaxed a little.
"I don't know. But it sounded bad."
I couldn't have summed it up better.
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SOMEONE CALLED HIM SOULZ ONCE @Weirdo_Willow
and thanks
I just think this book deserves 5
Tho tbh I'm just glad people like my book lol
guess what!
I added new chapters
And finished the book
1. souuls died
2. the book end ed
qwq
me after i read it: HELL YEAH BEAT THEIR ASS SOLUS!!
@AlphaWolf71808 @Your.local.idiot
I made more lol. Sorry it took so long things have been happening-
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(Dang moonston its tough knowing lots of people-)
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In case you didn't read it
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@SadisticLover
Chapter 9 is done
After all, I am a whiz with quizzes
Susie went on a walk across See More the park. Suddenly--
The word 'suddenly' adds suspense, and makes you want to know what happens next. You read on, often quicker, to match the pace of the story.
When your ending a chapter, put something that finishes your thought, yet has potential to open up the next chapter. I'm not sure how to make an example of this, so just look at the last sentence or words at the end of my chapters. It SHOULD make you think, make you wonder, what is going to happen next. Or even make some theories in your head for later in the book.
Out of curiosity, what do you think is going to happen next in my book?
@moonston
I hope I'm not confusing. that's one tip.
@moonston
For example, Ash (which can be a boy or a girl), has problems with their magic, and feels like Solus is kind and mysterious. She thinks he is powerful, but holding See More back.
In Solus's opinion (which I don't want to spoil anything so I'll be vague), doesn't feel right in the class. He is different, and everyone knows he's differernt, so he hides his secrets and thoughts well. In chapter 7, he starts taking more notice in Ash, cause she helped him.
@moonston
I'm really glad you like chapter 6, I wasn't sure about it
did you see the authors note at the bottom?
I'm glad you like the story, and I will happily take suggestions