Chapter 31- I Trust You
After a moment he pulled his hand away. I opened my eyes. He looked a bit troubled."What?"
"I.. Should go."
He started getting up but I grabbed his wrist.
"Why?"
He stopped, and sighed.
"Its none of your business."
"I beg to differ."
"Its a long story."
"You had no problem telling me other things before."
"I've only known you for like a week."
"Yet we need each other."
"Dammit Ash..."
"No, tell me what's going on. You said I might be able to help you. I want to help you."
He was quiet, looking away from me. I held my stare at him until he got uncomfortable. He looked back at me.
"I'm not supposed to be here."
I let go of his arm.
"Is your physco sister going to attack us or something?"
He hesitated.
"Don't talk about her like that."
I nodded, and crossed my arms. I would wait until he told me.
Eventually he did.
"If its not obvious, giving information to someone who is considered a enemy is a traitorous act. If I get caught, I'm dead."
"It can't be that bad.." I mumbled, but I knew that the punishment is probably severe.
"Its bad. May I go now?"
"How do I know your not about to go tell the demons where I live and how to hurt me?"
He paused, then pulled me in and kissed my cheek. I felt my face heat up.
"I trust you."
He then vanished.
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SOMEONE CALLED HIM SOULZ ONCE @Weirdo_Willow
and thanks
I just think this book deserves 5
Tho tbh I'm just glad people like my book lol
guess what!
I added new chapters
And finished the book
1. souuls died
2. the book end ed
qwq
me after i read it: HELL YEAH BEAT THEIR ASS SOLUS!!
@AlphaWolf71808 @Your.local.idiot
I made more lol. Sorry it took so long things have been happening-
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(Dang moonston its tough knowing lots of people-)
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@moonston See More
@MysteriousHyun
In case you didn't read it
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@SadisticLover
Chapter 9 is done
After all, I am a whiz with quizzes
Susie went on a walk across See More the park. Suddenly--
The word 'suddenly' adds suspense, and makes you want to know what happens next. You read on, often quicker, to match the pace of the story.
When your ending a chapter, put something that finishes your thought, yet has potential to open up the next chapter. I'm not sure how to make an example of this, so just look at the last sentence or words at the end of my chapters. It SHOULD make you think, make you wonder, what is going to happen next. Or even make some theories in your head for later in the book.
Out of curiosity, what do you think is going to happen next in my book?
@moonston
I hope I'm not confusing. that's one tip.
@moonston
For example, Ash (which can be a boy or a girl), has problems with their magic, and feels like Solus is kind and mysterious. She thinks he is powerful, but holding See More back.
In Solus's opinion (which I don't want to spoil anything so I'll be vague), doesn't feel right in the class. He is different, and everyone knows he's differernt, so he hides his secrets and thoughts well. In chapter 7, he starts taking more notice in Ash, cause she helped him.
@moonston
I'm really glad you like chapter 6, I wasn't sure about it
did you see the authors note at the bottom?
I'm glad you like the story, and I will happily take suggestions