Chapter 24- To Kill Or Not To Kill
Solus froze. He was facing away from me, but I could see his fists clench slightly."What."
"You heard me. How many... Hmm.. I believe it was three. Three other angels have stood before me, in a similar way as you. You know, all you angels are different, but you all have the same weaknesses. The same heart. The same rules burned in your blood. I know for a fact that when a angel dies, its the nearest angels duty to avenge them. You can't help it. It's second nature. I also know that every angel has three weaknesses to get past their magic. Any weapon can hurt you, so long as you let your guard down."
Solus's wings raised slightly. He turned his head slightly to the side, so he was speaking over his shoulder.
"You killed the other angels."
His voice was flat, but behind it I could tell that he was emotional. A mix of grief, a mix of anger perhaps. It was hard to tell.
"Now now, I wouldn't say that. After all, there was one angel I kept alive... but they died at the hands of my leader."
"And who is that?"
"You should know his name. We're a group. Scratch and me are the ones who do all the hard work. We're the assasins. There are quite a few others in this group, but none are on earth."
Then she smiled.
"Speaking of, angel boy, why are YOU on earth? Don't you have a land of your own?"
Solus was silent.
"Oh, that's right. It was 'tainted'. Jeez, you angels sure are crazy about your magic. A little bit of death, what's the problem?"
Solus didn't say anything.
"Cat got your tongue?"
Solus looked up at the sky and closed his eyes.
"I can feel your power. It's in the ground you walk on, in the air you breathe, and in the water you drink. I can feel your aura."
Scar looked a bit uncomfortable. She shifted in place slightly, and I saw her getting ready to fight if need be.
Solus turned to her.
"Together your both stronger then me. Let's see if I can change that."
His sword appeared in his hand and he lunged towards scar.
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SOMEONE CALLED HIM SOULZ ONCE @Weirdo_Willow
and thanks
I just think this book deserves 5
Tho tbh I'm just glad people like my book lol
guess what!
I added new chapters
And finished the book
1. souuls died
2. the book end ed
qwq
me after i read it: HELL YEAH BEAT THEIR ASS SOLUS!!
@AlphaWolf71808 @Your.local.idiot
I made more lol. Sorry it took so long things have been happening-
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(Dang moonston its tough knowing lots of people-)
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@moonston See More
@MysteriousHyun
In case you didn't read it
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@SadisticLover
Chapter 9 is done
After all, I am a whiz with quizzes
Susie went on a walk across See More the park. Suddenly--
The word 'suddenly' adds suspense, and makes you want to know what happens next. You read on, often quicker, to match the pace of the story.
When your ending a chapter, put something that finishes your thought, yet has potential to open up the next chapter. I'm not sure how to make an example of this, so just look at the last sentence or words at the end of my chapters. It SHOULD make you think, make you wonder, what is going to happen next. Or even make some theories in your head for later in the book.
Out of curiosity, what do you think is going to happen next in my book?
@moonston
I hope I'm not confusing. that's one tip.
@moonston
For example, Ash (which can be a boy or a girl), has problems with their magic, and feels like Solus is kind and mysterious. She thinks he is powerful, but holding See More back.
In Solus's opinion (which I don't want to spoil anything so I'll be vague), doesn't feel right in the class. He is different, and everyone knows he's differernt, so he hides his secrets and thoughts well. In chapter 7, he starts taking more notice in Ash, cause she helped him.
@moonston
I'm really glad you like chapter 6, I wasn't sure about it
did you see the authors note at the bottom?
I'm glad you like the story, and I will happily take suggestions