Chapter 21- Sweet Dreams
It has been a day since I woke up in bed. For some reason I stayed solely in Solus's room instead of being allowed to explore the house. He had warned me, saying"If you get caught you can't stay here anymore, and I want to make sure your ok."
And so, because I can't leave the room, I have to sleep in his bed.
Its not what you think! He's not even in the bed with me. In fact, just so that its not awkward, He sleeps in the corner with his wings wrapped around him like a blanket. At night, when the temperatures drop, I can hear him shivering.
I couldn't believe that he helped me while he was injured. The fight played in my mind. He could have died. And I have no way to repay him.
I slipped out of bed, placing my warm feet on the cold ground. I made my way to him, and paused to listen if his breathing changed. When it didn't and he was still out cold, I gently moved the wings out of the way. His wings felt really soft, even the golden feathers felt nice. I quickly shook my head. I did not want to get distracted.
I put my arms under his shoulders and lifted him up slowly and carefully. He was heavy, but oddly lighter then I thought. Carrying him over to the bed, I laid him down in it on one side. I looked around the room, and sighed. Guess I was going to be the one spending the night in the corner.
Just as I was about to walk to the corner, I heard a slight shuffle. Then Solus wrapped his wings around me and pulled me into the bed with him. I turned my head and saw he had just woken up. He yawned.
"Why did you move me?"
"B-because you looked cold."
He thought for a moment, obviously tired, then shrugged. He held me and closed his eyes.
"Thank you."
We were really close. It made my face heat up, and I started trying to wiggle out of his grip when I realized.
'Maybe it's better to stay here instead of leaving just to freeze in the corner. Besides, I don't want to wake him up.'
So I put the blankets over us to keep us warm, then shut my eyes.
That night, I had peaceful dreams.
~Authors note~
omg I am really sorry I haven't made any chapters in awhile. I've been so busy with schoolwork, I forgot about it. ALSO I will be making a script soon (finally) so if the next chapter is slow that's why. If this chapter sucked I apologise, because I am really tired. also.... 95 F*CKING READS?! You guys are the best!
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SOMEONE CALLED HIM SOULZ ONCE @Weirdo_Willow
and thanks
I just think this book deserves 5
Tho tbh I'm just glad people like my book lol
guess what!
I added new chapters
And finished the book
1. souuls died
2. the book end ed
qwq
me after i read it: HELL YEAH BEAT THEIR ASS SOLUS!!
@AlphaWolf71808 @Your.local.idiot
I made more lol. Sorry it took so long things have been happening-
@BlueTheQuizWhiz97
(Dang moonston its tough knowing lots of people-)
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@moonston See More
@MysteriousHyun
In case you didn't read it
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@SadisticLover
Chapter 9 is done
After all, I am a whiz with quizzes
Susie went on a walk across See More the park. Suddenly--
The word 'suddenly' adds suspense, and makes you want to know what happens next. You read on, often quicker, to match the pace of the story.
When your ending a chapter, put something that finishes your thought, yet has potential to open up the next chapter. I'm not sure how to make an example of this, so just look at the last sentence or words at the end of my chapters. It SHOULD make you think, make you wonder, what is going to happen next. Or even make some theories in your head for later in the book.
Out of curiosity, what do you think is going to happen next in my book?
@moonston
I hope I'm not confusing. that's one tip.
@moonston
For example, Ash (which can be a boy or a girl), has problems with their magic, and feels like Solus is kind and mysterious. She thinks he is powerful, but holding See More back.
In Solus's opinion (which I don't want to spoil anything so I'll be vague), doesn't feel right in the class. He is different, and everyone knows he's differernt, so he hides his secrets and thoughts well. In chapter 7, he starts taking more notice in Ash, cause she helped him.
@moonston
I'm really glad you like chapter 6, I wasn't sure about it
did you see the authors note at the bottom?
I'm glad you like the story, and I will happily take suggestions