Chapter 20- Golden Lies
Solus turned to Alex. He had the taste of blood in his mouth. To him it tasted disgusting, but he knew other races thought of it differently.He felt a power building in his chest, a little bit of pressure was all it took. He quickly put his hand on the ground, and felt as his magic was released. The tips of his fingers turned to pure gold as he in turn made the grass turn golden. It raced out in all directions, turning everything it touched into a poor mans dream.
Alex's eyes widened. Just as it touched the tip of his boot, he shouted "Goldweaver--?!"
Then he was frozen. Solus took his hand away and looked at me. The gold had gone right around me, leaving me unharmed. The sky had a few stray clouds. Alex was a demon, he could survive as a statue for a month at most. That meant that when it rained, he would be unfrozen. Solus picked me up and put me on his back. Suddenly he winced, and saw his injured wing had rubbed against the ground.
'I need to do better. This... This was too close.'
He raised his wings and flew away, leaving the golden top of the hill and the new statue among it.
I gasped as Solus took his hand away.
"w-what was.. o-oh."
"yeah."
I was worried for him. In the vision he was... scared?
I hugged him, and he hugged back, wincing cause of his wounds.
"I wish I could have helped you. I'm sorry"
"Its fine, really. Don't you worry about a thing, Ash, I'm alright."
~Authors Note~
HELLO!! This was short because... *drumroll*... I am making a Solus/Ash quiz! well, one of these quizzes. SUCH AS:
"Would Solus date you?"
"Would Ash date you?"
"How well do you know Legacy?"
AND OTHERS!!
But I haven't made any yet, so wait a bit.
^w^ Enjoy~
-Blue
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SOMEONE CALLED HIM SOULZ ONCE @Weirdo_Willow
and thanks
I just think this book deserves 5
Tho tbh I'm just glad people like my book lol
guess what!
I added new chapters
And finished the book
1. souuls died
2. the book end ed
qwq
me after i read it: HELL YEAH BEAT THEIR ASS SOLUS!!
@AlphaWolf71808 @Your.local.idiot
I made more lol. Sorry it took so long things have been happening-
@BlueTheQuizWhiz97
(Dang moonston its tough knowing lots of people-)
@moonston
@Kitten_Snowflakes
@MagicMouse16
@Michael.Afton735
@moonston See More
@MysteriousHyun
In case you didn't read it
@moonston
@Michael.Afton735
@Kitten_Snowflakes
@SadisticLover
Chapter 9 is done
After all, I am a whiz with quizzes
Susie went on a walk across See More the park. Suddenly--
The word 'suddenly' adds suspense, and makes you want to know what happens next. You read on, often quicker, to match the pace of the story.
When your ending a chapter, put something that finishes your thought, yet has potential to open up the next chapter. I'm not sure how to make an example of this, so just look at the last sentence or words at the end of my chapters. It SHOULD make you think, make you wonder, what is going to happen next. Or even make some theories in your head for later in the book.
Out of curiosity, what do you think is going to happen next in my book?
@moonston
I hope I'm not confusing. that's one tip.
@moonston
For example, Ash (which can be a boy or a girl), has problems with their magic, and feels like Solus is kind and mysterious. She thinks he is powerful, but holding See More back.
In Solus's opinion (which I don't want to spoil anything so I'll be vague), doesn't feel right in the class. He is different, and everyone knows he's differernt, so he hides his secrets and thoughts well. In chapter 7, he starts taking more notice in Ash, cause she helped him.
@moonston
I'm really glad you like chapter 6, I wasn't sure about it
did you see the authors note at the bottom?
I'm glad you like the story, and I will happily take suggestions