Chapter 14- Shield
The person lead me to a eyewash station. I shoved my eyes in the water and cleaned them. When I was done, I could see clearly again. I blinked a few times, then my eyes widened.The whole classroom was trashed, mushroom clouds and burn marks everywhere from when students ran from the original chemi-bomb. But all I could think of was about how much trouble I'll be in.
"Oh god.. This is all my fault"
"No, its mine" I flinched and turned to see Solus standing behind me. He was dirty from ash and he smelled like chemicals, but he looked ok.
Henry walked up, smirking.
"Ha, I saw what you did there Ash. You big klutz!" He started laughing, and Solus growled. He looked around at the still chaotic room, then punched Henry in the nose. Henry fell, holding his bloody nose and cursing.
"What the hell was that for!"
"Keep your opinions to yourself." Solus went outside the classroom, where everyone else was heading. I followed. By doing that small action of possibly breaking Henry's nose, he gave me a whole new level of respect for him.
"Ok class, until we get this cleaned up class is cancelled."
Everyone cheered.
"However, I don't expect you to do nothing. Take a shower, get changed, then review your notes. Please."
Everyone walked away to do their own things. I followed Solus yet again. He took his shirt off just before he entered the boys changeroom, trying to take the chemicals away from his body.
"Solus."
He turned and looked at me. I took one look at him and felt my face go hot. He was nothing like what I imagined. Instead of being skinny and weak looking like I expected, he was fit. REALLY fit. I stared at him until he shuffled his feet.
"What?"
"U-um.. T-thanks. H-henry w-was.. I-I mean.." I stuttered, distracted and embarrassed.
"Its nothing. Can I take a shower now?" He seemed oblivious to my staring at his faint 6 pack.
"U-um.. Y-yeah."
"Oh and Ash?"
"Y-yes..?"
"If Henry picks on you again, tell me." He went into the changeroom. I shook my head, snapping out of it.
Solus was so kind, so protective.. It was like he was my shield or something.
The thought made me happy. I went to the girls changeroom, humming a tune.
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SOMEONE CALLED HIM SOULZ ONCE @Weirdo_Willow
and thanks
I just think this book deserves 5
Tho tbh I'm just glad people like my book lol
guess what!
I added new chapters
And finished the book
1. souuls died
2. the book end ed
qwq
me after i read it: HELL YEAH BEAT THEIR ASS SOLUS!!
@AlphaWolf71808 @Your.local.idiot
I made more lol. Sorry it took so long things have been happening-
@BlueTheQuizWhiz97
(Dang moonston its tough knowing lots of people-)
@moonston
@Kitten_Snowflakes
@MagicMouse16
@Michael.Afton735
@moonston See More
@MysteriousHyun
In case you didn't read it
@moonston
@Michael.Afton735
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@SadisticLover
Chapter 9 is done
After all, I am a whiz with quizzes
Susie went on a walk across See More the park. Suddenly--
The word 'suddenly' adds suspense, and makes you want to know what happens next. You read on, often quicker, to match the pace of the story.
When your ending a chapter, put something that finishes your thought, yet has potential to open up the next chapter. I'm not sure how to make an example of this, so just look at the last sentence or words at the end of my chapters. It SHOULD make you think, make you wonder, what is going to happen next. Or even make some theories in your head for later in the book.
Out of curiosity, what do you think is going to happen next in my book?
@moonston
I hope I'm not confusing. that's one tip.
@moonston
For example, Ash (which can be a boy or a girl), has problems with their magic, and feels like Solus is kind and mysterious. She thinks he is powerful, but holding See More back.
In Solus's opinion (which I don't want to spoil anything so I'll be vague), doesn't feel right in the class. He is different, and everyone knows he's differernt, so he hides his secrets and thoughts well. In chapter 7, he starts taking more notice in Ash, cause she helped him.
@moonston
I'm really glad you like chapter 6, I wasn't sure about it
did you see the authors note at the bottom?
I'm glad you like the story, and I will happily take suggestions