Chapter 13- Science, chemicals...Action?
I laughed."Did you see his face? You really upset him"
Solus tried to smile casually, but couldn't help but grin.
"He was bothering me."
"Well you sure as hell didn't seem bothered." I responded.
"He called me angel boy, and kept talking." He said simply.
"You don't like being called angel boy?"
"Nope. Way too many people call me that, and they always mean it as a bad thing."
"Makes sense."
We sat in silence. Solus seemed so calm, and so prepared. It made me feel emotional and inferior in general. It annoyed me a bit. But wait, isn't that what his aura does to people? It makes them more emotional and overthink things. Just look at Henry and Jonathan. They must feel the same way.
I quickly shoved these thoughts from my mind. Solus is my friend. He doesn't choose what his aura does. It just happens.
The bell rang, and we went to our next class. It was science. We basically mixed chemicals until something happened. At least, in my case. I suck at science.
Solus's eyes lit up at the sight of all those chemicals. I smiled.
We sat down next to each other as the teacher went to the front of the class. She started teaching us, telling us the directions and the results that should happen. I mostly left it to Solus, passing him the chemicals he needs.
He slowly poured one chemical into a test tube. I grabbed the next chemical, looking at the teacher as I handed it to Solus. Except instead of going into his hand, it hit his elbow while he was pouring. Chemicals went everywhere, mixing and changing colours. Then it started bubbling dangerously.
A random kid yelled, "Look out! chemi-bomb!"
Everyone dove down or away to avoid it, but me being the confused idiot I was stayed put. I got a blast of chemicals to the face. I cried out in pain and held my eyes, stumbling around blind. I heard a crash as more test tubes fell over. Then I felt two hands go on my shoulders and lead me away. I heard some people cough from the new chemicals in the air, and the cough behind me sounded familiar.
Did I mention I sucked at science?
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SOMEONE CALLED HIM SOULZ ONCE @Weirdo_Willow
and thanks
I just think this book deserves 5
Tho tbh I'm just glad people like my book lol
guess what!
I added new chapters
And finished the book
1. souuls died
2. the book end ed
qwq
me after i read it: HELL YEAH BEAT THEIR ASS SOLUS!!
@AlphaWolf71808 @Your.local.idiot
I made more lol. Sorry it took so long things have been happening-
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(Dang moonston its tough knowing lots of people-)
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@MysteriousHyun
In case you didn't read it
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@SadisticLover
Chapter 9 is done
After all, I am a whiz with quizzes
Susie went on a walk across See More the park. Suddenly--
The word 'suddenly' adds suspense, and makes you want to know what happens next. You read on, often quicker, to match the pace of the story.
When your ending a chapter, put something that finishes your thought, yet has potential to open up the next chapter. I'm not sure how to make an example of this, so just look at the last sentence or words at the end of my chapters. It SHOULD make you think, make you wonder, what is going to happen next. Or even make some theories in your head for later in the book.
Out of curiosity, what do you think is going to happen next in my book?
@moonston
I hope I'm not confusing. that's one tip.
@moonston
For example, Ash (which can be a boy or a girl), has problems with their magic, and feels like Solus is kind and mysterious. She thinks he is powerful, but holding See More back.
In Solus's opinion (which I don't want to spoil anything so I'll be vague), doesn't feel right in the class. He is different, and everyone knows he's differernt, so he hides his secrets and thoughts well. In chapter 7, he starts taking more notice in Ash, cause she helped him.
@moonston
I'm really glad you like chapter 6, I wasn't sure about it
did you see the authors note at the bottom?
I'm glad you like the story, and I will happily take suggestions