Ways to Say Goodbye

Ways to Say Goodbye

This is a story about a girl named Victoria. Her parents are divorced, so she lives with her mom in Oakville. When Victoria finds out her mom is dating Tom, a person that she works with, she feels so angry. This is ruining her plan to get her parents back together! After Tom proposes, Victoria learns that she'll have to move to Vancouver with her new dad and new siblings, Abby and Matt. Victoria has to go to a new school, make new friends and live in a new house and town. And she's dealing with mortal enemies, a crush and a totally new family. On top of all that, her new dad leaves a note that she doesn't completely understand...

published on November 28, 2015not completed

Detention

After school detention, 3:00 pm, Friday, December 4th, 2015

I walked into detention with a scared look my face. I've never been to detention before and I didn't know what it was like.

When I opened the door, I saw Amanda sitting there, bored. "Amanda? What are you doing here?" I asked her. "Oh, ya, I was talking in class, so here I am," she replied. "Oh," I said. "Who were you talking to?" I asked. "Oh I was talking to Jake. He actually sat beside ME today! Can you believe it?!" Amanda said excitedly. Well, obviously she was talking to Jake. she talks way too much when she sees him and you can only get sent to detention for talking if talk too much.

"Ok, everyone take your seats and NO TALKING," said the teacher. I didn't know her, but everyone says that the teacher that does detention is really mean. Everyone ran to a desk and kept their mouth shut. I could see a few people hiding their phones in the desk while texting each other. The teacher really should've taken the phones away. I wish I could've been doing that right now instead of just staring ahead.

After school detention, 3:45 pm, December 4th

Ugh!!! Somebody kill me! I've been sitting here for so long, I'm surprised that I haven't fallen asleep! "Ok, everyone, you can go now," said the teacher. Everyone bolted for the door, eager to get out. I took my phone and ran out of the class.

Finally! Free at last!
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Wow! Amazing story! I wonder what happens next!
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on December 06, 2015