a murderers guardian

a murderers guardian

15 year old Mia Millered get into a car crash, having a good soul she is sent to heaven and is assigned to be a guardian angel, to a murder.

published on April 28, 2015not completed

Back from the first day

I float up back into heaven and smile at James face as i do so.
"bye bye" i say and he just blinks.  I laugh and float back up to the tree where Mavis was waiting
"so" Mavis said smiling "how was it?"
"good" i say walking over
"good so now what do i do"?
"keep him from doing anything...dangerous"
"i think i can do that"
"you showed yourself to him"?
"was i allowed to do that" i began to panic
"yeah but some people usually don't"
"oh" i relax "so what do i do now"?
"go back i guess" i smile "thanks"
"no problem any time" i look down at James "I'll go back now who knows what he's gonna do!
"ok bye" he says
"bye"
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really cool but a lot of grammer mistakes (sorry) anyway, I LOVE the plot line :)
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It's ok and thx!
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on June 12, 2015
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on June 12, 2015
Add more, please! :D
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on June 04, 2015
Pwease continue it X3
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on April 29, 2015
The description sounds very intriguing! I can't wait to read more!
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on April 28, 2015