Diamond the hedgehog ( Re-Write coming soon)

Diamond the hedgehog ( Re-Write coming soon)

Diamond is a princess of Orcia( Or-see-ya). There's an attack and has to leave the kingdom with some freedom fighters. They ask her to join but, another evil group asks her to join too, while kidnapping her. Will she choose good, or die? Can she save Orcia? Can she protect herself?

published on June 09, 2016not completed

We won?!!!!

We won?!!!! Diamond's POV
So now its time for Part 2. I was told to put a white dress on along with boots. I had to let my hair down too. My team,witch is Strike and I were late to go to the arena. Everyone else was there. OMG! It was soo embearassing!! Mostly all the boys stared at me. Any how, we went inside this round place. It was crowded. Then all the teams were inside.It was like a little hut. They locked us in here!! I started to cough. This white, smoke started to fill the room. All i heard was coughing.
"Strike, * coughs*, we* cough* have to get out* coughs *." I stuttered. He nodded. I went on my knees, and started feeling the floor for anything. I started to cough harder know. He lifted me up,and this time he went down on his knees.Of course no one could see anything.That was good.
" Diamond,i,* cough cough cough* found something." He whispered. I bent down. Strike lifted up a small platform. There was two masks underneath. I took one and quickly put it on.Strike did the same. Now we had to get out. I seen people drop to the floor.They must've passed out.It was crowded still. I went close to a wall on the left,Strike behind me 4 feet away. I found a crack. I slowly lifted it up. My jaw dropped. There was a small place to get outside. I motioned with my hand. Strike went out first. Then i left after. I smiled and we took our masks out. Strike stared at me and blushed.

Strike's POV
Diamond looked so beautiful in that dress. I blushed.
"Hey,we need to find shelter before anyone sees us."
"Yea, right.",she said. I took her hand and started running.I was a fast runner. Diamond was struggling to keep up.
"Strike,wait! I can't run that fast!" I stopped. Diamond was panting. I picked her up bride-style and ran again. Diamond blushed. I ran a long time. I stopped near a small stream.I put her down and blushed. I sat next to her.

Diamond's POV
I can't believe he did that! I have a boyfriend you know! I've been dating him for a long time. Why am i blushing?! We sat beside a stream. Strike cleared his throat.
"So, um,do you have a b-boyfriend?" He asked me.
"Yes."
"Who?"
"Silver." He shrugged. Why'd he ask me that? Why am I blushing so hard?! I cupped my hands with water and put it on my hair. OH! I remember I have a twist tie! I quickly tied my hair in a curly pony. My twist tie broke. Strike stared at me and I stared back. We were both blushing so hard. Then, Strike started to lean in. I watched him. I leaned in a little bit. Wait, am I leaning in?! Our lips almost touched.They were about an inch apart. I hesitated and turned my head.Strike kissed my cheek. I looked over at him.He had a shocked face.What just happened?! I don't love Strike! Wait, do i? We stared at each other. We got up. I looked at him one last time and ran-not sure where i was going.

Strike's POV
I almost kissed Diamond! Why'd she turn her head? Next thing I know, she starts running away. "Diamond-wait!!" I grabbed her hand.She broke free. I stood there. I rubbed the back of my head. What's wrong with her? My jaw drops open. I TOTALLY FORGOT SHE WAS DATING SILVER!! NO,NO,NO,NO! I RUINED OUR FRIEND SHIP! DIAMONDS GONNA HATE ME FOREVER.WHAT IF SILVER WANTS TO  MARRY HER?! WHAT IF HE, SAW US! WHAT IF,HE WENT TO BUY A RING,AND AFTER THE GAMES PROPOSE TO HER!! I punched a tree.It left a deep dent. I ran.I ran and ran and ran.I seen Diamond's face. I quickly zoommed up a tree.

Diamond's POV
I found a knife.Probably from the last game. I cleaned it off.It shone in a little bit of sunlight. A tear ran down my cheek,as i sat on a log.I wiped it off madly. I quickly toughened up. My long hair was blowing in the wind. My hair was a pain in a butt. I am trying to forget about what happened,if your wondering why I'm not saying anything about it. I clenched my hair. I swiped a chunk of my hair off. My hair was now medium length. I have a weird feeling.Someone's watching me! I looked  up quickly and threw the knife in the tree.  
"AH! CRAP!",someone said. I looked up and saw Strike. He jumped from the tree. I jumped an grabbed a knife madly. I was mad.
"What's wrong, Diamond?!" I glared.
" Your trying to make me cheat on Silver!!",I let my anger out. He huffed.I relaxed.
"Diamond, that's bull crap! I'm sorry I did that. I just couldn't stop myself.Sorry.",he apoligized. I actually smiled,an evil smile. I tackled him. I seen Strike's terrified face.I laughed. Strike started to laugh and I got off of him. Strike ran his hand in my hair.
"What happened to your hair?"
"Its a pain in a butt,so I cut it off." I blushed and turned back to reality. I grabbed his wrist,and pushed it back. He blushed a little.I started to look for food-before we starve to death. 2 Days passed, and my team won!! When we were going to a stream, we heard the final bell!! WE WON!!
I was walking to the parking lot and Silver was the only won there. He gave me a short kiss on the lips.
"So, how was the games?!"
"It was easy for me.Well part 2 was!" He smiled and we kissed again.This time it was long. Then,he took my hands, and went on one knee.
"Diamond,Rosalina,Collins, I will always love you. Since the day we met,I knew you were the one. Will you do me the honor and marry me?!" everyone was crowding around.I was speechless. Do I really love Silver? I looked back at Strike quickly,then turned back before anyone noticed.Am I really the one? Is he the one for me? I can't say No. Then,Silver's heart will shatter. .I'll say yes,and think about it. Tears were streaming in my eyes. Not tears of joy.Silver was waiting. I can't let him wait. Come on,Diamond.You can do it.
"Yes!" Did I just say that?! Silver put the ring on my finger and kissed me. I didn't kiss back.
"Aww!", I heard the crowd say. Silver opened the door for me.He was happy. I tried so hard to look happy.I looked at the window   Silver held my hand. I smiled.Kind of. I looked at the window.All I could look,and think about was Strike. I looked at my ring.It was beautiful.  Beautiful,like Strike. I cried silently.
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Wait, she put her necklace-crown on top of her head?
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on June 06, 2018
Making an announcement! I'M RE-WRITING THIS STORY! THANKS! X3
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on July 15, 2016
Great story, dude.
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on July 06, 2016
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on July 05, 2016
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!<3 <3 <3
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Thank you so much! XD X3 :D
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on June 23, 2016
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on June 23, 2016
So me and Sonic are now...*blush* okay ^\\\\^ hehehe
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Not for long. HeheheheheB):D
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*gasp* okie XD
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on June 16, 2016
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on June 16, 2016
Yep :D
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on June 16, 2016
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on June 15, 2016
SCREW YOU AND YOUR DOUBLE SPACES.
I GIVE ON THIS
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:pHaha Lol Xd
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on June 15, 2016
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on June 15, 2016
Ok thx so much.
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No problem. ^-^
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ok @ breann.west.5 X3 :p
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on June 14, 2016
Actually, Lunti and Sunni are together. But if you want, you can pair them in your story. C:
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on June 13, 2016
is it ok if Lunti is with one of my characters i made?
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on June 13, 2016
Thanks! ^-^
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on June 13, 2016
That's amazing @breann.west.5
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on June 13, 2016
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on June 13, 2016
Just finished. I'll upload it, hold on. ^_^
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on June 13, 2016
:x:-B:-B
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on June 13, 2016
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on June 13, 2016
Oh, um...If you like, I could do a redesign of her, so she's no longer a recolor...
And if you want, you could put one of my characters in there. Here they are...
-Lunti the Budgie (Lesbian)
-Sunni the Conure (Lesbian
-Karana Coyote (Straight See More
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on June 13, 2016
@love_sonackie
@sapphirethehedgehog
@swiftelementthedarkhedgewolf
I might use your characters
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Oh! Thank you! :D
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Have you read it? What do you think? ^.^U
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on June 15, 2016
Thank you! And I know, I want to work on that ^.^U
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on June 15, 2016
I added your storie to my fav list!!!! :-B:D
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on June 15, 2016
:pB):D:)
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on June 15, 2016
Yea, Thx but ppl were complaining that she was a recolor
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on June 15, 2016
Diamond seems great too! I've seen at his in my recommend catogory a lot but never got the chance to read it, so finally being able to and seeing my charature in it is amazing! Thank you! :D plus we both have gem names :-O
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on June 15, 2016
yea love your character
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on June 10, 2016