Diamond the hedgehog ( Re-Write coming soon)

Diamond the hedgehog ( Re-Write coming soon)

Diamond is a princess of Orcia( Or-see-ya). There's an attack and has to leave the kingdom with some freedom fighters. They ask her to join but, another evil group asks her to join too, while kidnapping her. Will she choose good, or die? Can she save Orcia? Can she protect herself?

published on June 09, 2016not completed

Decisisions

Decisisions
Diamond's POV
Strike's with Egg man. My head started pounding,along with my heart. My eyes went a black,with the outlines of other mobians. My hands were hot,actually burning. I stomped my foot.

Strike's POV
Diamond stomped her foot and the ground cracked under my feet.  Her eyes went all black. She grew big white wings. Diamond's hands had white blazing fire around them.

"Diamond,Stop! You don't know what your doing!",I yelled.
"Yes I do! You-You-You TRAITOR! U LIAR!"
"dIAMOND! CALM DOWN!"  
"I CAN'T CONTROL IT!" Diamond went on her knees. White fire was around her. Diamond released and fire went every where. It sent me flying against a wall. I knocked out,along with Diamond.

Diamond's POV
I woke up again. There were white fire balls blazing against the wall. I quickly put them out. Strike's eyes opened. Tears were streaming off my face.
"What did I do?" Strike pressed a button and left. Egg but walked in.
"Egg man! Let me go!",I screamed as I squared up,ready for a fight.
"Ho,He ha ha ha hah hahahah! Your going to work for me princess. Your little friend,worked for me all along. Good luck trying to escape. Make a decision. If you do work for me,I'll teach you how to control your powers. Your husband  won't be harmed. It'll be fun. Hehehe! And, I'll let you out sometimes. What do you say,Princess?! HEHEHEHEHEH!"        
"I-I'll. I'l do it! For my husband!",I managed to say.
"Very well then."
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Wait, she put her necklace-crown on top of her head?
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on June 06, 2018
Making an announcement! I'M RE-WRITING THIS STORY! THANKS! X3
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on July 15, 2016
Great story, dude.
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on July 06, 2016
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on July 05, 2016
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!<3 <3 <3
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Thank you so much! XD X3 :D
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on June 23, 2016
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on June 23, 2016
So me and Sonic are now...*blush* okay ^\\\\^ hehehe
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Not for long. HeheheheheB):D
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*gasp* okie XD
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on June 16, 2016
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on June 16, 2016
Yep :D
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on June 16, 2016
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on June 15, 2016
SCREW YOU AND YOUR DOUBLE SPACES.
I GIVE ON THIS
NO
STAHP.
THE DOUBLE SPACES See More
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:pHaha Lol Xd
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on June 15, 2016
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on June 15, 2016
Ok thx so much.
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No problem. ^-^
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ok @ breann.west.5 X3 :p
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on June 14, 2016
Actually, Lunti and Sunni are together. But if you want, you can pair them in your story. C:
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on June 13, 2016
is it ok if Lunti is with one of my characters i made?
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on June 13, 2016
Thanks! ^-^
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on June 13, 2016
That's amazing @breann.west.5
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on June 13, 2016
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on June 13, 2016
Just finished. I'll upload it, hold on. ^_^
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on June 13, 2016
:x:-B:-B
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on June 13, 2016
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on June 13, 2016
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on June 13, 2016
Oh, um...If you like, I could do a redesign of her, so she's no longer a recolor...
And if you want, you could put one of my characters in there. Here they are...
-Lunti the Budgie (Lesbian)
-Sunni the Conure (Lesbian
-Karana Coyote (Straight See More
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on June 13, 2016
@love_sonackie
@sapphirethehedgehog
@swiftelementthedarkhedgewolf
I might use your characters
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Oh! Thank you! :D
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Have you read it? What do you think? ^.^U
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on June 15, 2016
Thank you! And I know, I want to work on that ^.^U
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on June 15, 2016
I added your storie to my fav list!!!! :-B:D
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on June 15, 2016
:pB):D:)
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on June 15, 2016
Yea, Thx but ppl were complaining that she was a recolor
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on June 15, 2016
Diamond seems great too! I've seen at his in my recommend catogory a lot but never got the chance to read it, so finally being able to and seeing my charature in it is amazing! Thank you! :D plus we both have gem names :-O
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on June 15, 2016
yea love your character
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on June 15, 2016
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on June 10, 2016