Diamond the hedgehog ( Re-Write coming soon)

Diamond the hedgehog ( Re-Write coming soon)

Diamond is a princess of Orcia( Or-see-ya). There's an attack and has to leave the kingdom with some freedom fighters. They ask her to join but, another evil group asks her to join too, while kidnapping her. Will she choose good, or die? Can she save Orcia? Can she protect herself?

published on June 09, 2016not completed

Captured

Captured Mi-Mi's POV
I drove fast with the girl Egg man told me to get. A cop put its siren on when I drove past. I didn't care. I put my helmet on. There were more cops chasing me.
"Bull Crap!!" I drove faster this time. I finally got to Egg man's base without getting arrested.

Diamond's POV
I woke up in this glass tube. There was a collar on me. I was in green fizzy stuff. I was floating. I banged on the glass. "HELP! GET ME OUT OF THIS THING!" I screamed. The fizzy stuff stung me. I fainted. A day later............
I woke up sitting down in the glass tube with no green fizzy stuff inside. I seen the cat, and this tall guy.I recognized him at once. That's the guy who attacked my kingdom! I clenched my fists.He was giving the cat money. I banged the glass.  I can't get out! I started to freak out. I turned and jerked my head.My arms and legs started to feel weird. My teeth were growing big. I felt claws coming out. Fur was growing all over me. I felt my tail fluff out. I turned into a dark grey wolf with purple highlights and a purple tail. I had red blazing eyes. I was now on 4 legs.I'm not me anymore.. I'm a monster! "GRRRRRR!" I jumped and broke the tube.
"SHATTER SHATTER!",went the glass. I smelled meat. A feline."Geeerrrrr!" I ran straight towards the stupid,feline.

Mi-Mi's POV
"AHHHHHHHHHH!",I screamed and dropped the money. A big,no,HUGE wolf came running towards me. I know imma puma,but I never had a thing for dogs either. I ran.
"Damn! Stupid heel boots!" I threw them off and ran. I was a fast feline.I quickly ran out of Egg man's base. "Bull crap! No time to get my bike!", I said as I looked back.The wolf ran faster this time. I took of running on the highway. "Ha,huh,huh.",I panted. "AHHHHHHHH! DON'T HIT ME!!" A blue cor vet was speeding in my direction. The driver put his foot on an emergency stop. "BEEEEEEPPPP! GET OF THE ROAD!",the driver screamed. "Sorry!",I said as I stopped beside the window. The wolf was gone-Finally! I panted. " What are you doing running on the road-hot shot?",the driver said as he stared at my body. "I-i was just running from a b-beast!",I panted. "A beats? Hot shot?" "yes,a beast." "Hop in I'll give you a ride." "thank you." I quickly hopped in the passenger seat. We started moving. The wolf jumped on the front of the car."AHHHH!",we screamed at the same time. The driver hesitated. The wolf clawed the windshield glass and stuck its head in. The driver hesitated again and jerked the car to the right.We went and the car was spinning down a hill. I hit my head a lot of times and passed out when I saw blood.

Diamond's POV
I woke up in a wet dark forest. I sat up.I shivered.Wait a second,why am i cold? I looked down and saw that I was? Naked?! I hugged my self. What happened? I stood up and looked at my hands.They were stained red with blood. I killed something.Somebody.A tear fell to the ground.I wiped it off.
"Diamond? Diamond!",someone called my name. I felt my head. Uh,its happening again. My hands were getting claws. I transformed into a wolf.A hedge wolf.  

Strike's POV
I called her name over and over again.No answer. I sighed.
"She's not in this forest.",I told Blade.
"Yes,she is. I seen foot prints."
"Blade,just because you seen foot prints,doesn't mean it was hers."
"Well,it was wolf foot prints,and she turned into one."
"There could be more wolves,than just her."
"I'm pretty sure she's the only one in the night.A hedge wolf. It's a full moon."
"Fine,Blade, 30 more minutes and we go back to Egg man's base."
"Alright." I shone my flashlight. * stick snaps * "Blade what was that?"
"I don't know.",He shone his flashlight. Grrrrrrrrrr! I heard towards me.
"Diamond?!",I asked. * sound of tearing meat* I shone my flashlight.My eyes narrowed.I seen a grey wolf with purple highlights,and red blazing female eyes. She shone her teeth. Oh my god! They were long and sharp. She still had the collar on. "Blade all you need to do is shoot the dart gun.",I whispered.
"Why me?",he whispered back.
"Just do it."
"Fine." Blade put darts in the gun.It  made a loud noise. GRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!,Diamond growled again. I drop my flashlight and put my hand out. Diamond slowly walked towards me. She was about to back away,but fell to the ground.Blade shot her. I felt better.More relaxed.
"Alright.I'll put her in the cage." Blade dragged her into a medal cage and we went to Egg man's base.

Diamond's POV
I wake up inside a jail-like cell. I opened a small cabinet. I found a black jump suit. I put that on. I walked over to the bars. "Hello?Get me out of this thing!" Nobody answered. I sighed and sat on the floor. I heard foot steps. My eyes blazed with anger.
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Wait, she put her necklace-crown on top of her head?
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on June 06, 2018
Making an announcement! I'M RE-WRITING THIS STORY! THANKS! X3
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on July 15, 2016
Great story, dude.
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on July 06, 2016
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on July 05, 2016
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!<3 <3 <3
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Thank you so much! XD X3 :D
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on June 23, 2016
So me and Sonic are now...*blush* okay ^\\\\^ hehehe
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Not for long. HeheheheheB):D
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*gasp* okie XD
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on June 16, 2016
Yep :D
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on June 16, 2016
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on June 15, 2016
SCREW YOU AND YOUR DOUBLE SPACES.
I GIVE ON THIS
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:pHaha Lol Xd
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on June 15, 2016
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on June 15, 2016
Ok thx so much.
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No problem. ^-^
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ok @ breann.west.5 X3 :p
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on June 14, 2016
Actually, Lunti and Sunni are together. But if you want, you can pair them in your story. C:
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on June 13, 2016
is it ok if Lunti is with one of my characters i made?
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on June 13, 2016
Thanks! ^-^
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on June 13, 2016
That's amazing @breann.west.5
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on June 13, 2016
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on June 13, 2016
Just finished. I'll upload it, hold on. ^_^
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on June 13, 2016
:x:-B:-B
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on June 13, 2016
Oh, um...If you like, I could do a redesign of her, so she's no longer a recolor...
And if you want, you could put one of my characters in there. Here they are...
-Lunti the Budgie (Lesbian)
-Sunni the Conure (Lesbian
-Karana Coyote (Straight See More
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on June 13, 2016
@love_sonackie
@sapphirethehedgehog
@swiftelementthedarkhedgewolf
I might use your characters
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Oh! Thank you! :D
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Have you read it? What do you think? ^.^U
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on June 15, 2016
Thank you! And I know, I want to work on that ^.^U
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on June 15, 2016
I added your storie to my fav list!!!! :-B:D
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on June 15, 2016
:pB):D:)
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on June 15, 2016
Yea, Thx but ppl were complaining that she was a recolor
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on June 15, 2016
Diamond seems great too! I've seen at his in my recommend catogory a lot but never got the chance to read it, so finally being able to and seeing my charature in it is amazing! Thank you! :D plus we both have gem names :-O
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on June 15, 2016
yea love your character
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on June 10, 2016