Under the moonlight

Under the moonlight

Disclaimer: If this story seems like Twilight(as some people said it has before) then that was unintentional. Anyways with that said I hope you enjoy, please do not copy my idea as I have put in a lot of effort for this. If there is a lack of updates its usually because 1. I am busy, I do have a life of my own to deal with or 2. I have writers block or 3. I am away or have no wifi/internet access.

published on May 19, 2014not completed

Chapter 3: Regret

Chapter 3: Regret
The woman or at least in earlier years.( on right side)
Left side: wait and see!

I stood there unable to move, Pull yourself together Aria! I screamed to myself mentally. I started sprinting to where my house was, only to arrive and find it ablaze. People dressed in dark grey and black were looking around. One woman stood at the front just watching the- no My- house burn.

She was wearing a black jacket and you could see traces of a dark grey tank top underneath. The woman had black jeggings that stuck to her,black spiked combat boots and had her hair out.Her hair was black and with small waves. Her hands were by her side and she stood still.Two of the black garbed people came out dragging my unconscious mother before the other woman.

Mum was covered in cuts with slight burns as if she put up a fight.I wanted to kick and punch the people but I stayed silent and watched with tears forming.The woman shouted something I couldn't hear and the two men dragged my mother away. The woman's gaze followed them and I could see that her eyes were a striking silver and had a scar going through the left one and that her left eye was more white then silver.

A few seconds later two other men came out with a bit of blood on them. They were dragging my dad who was well awake and growling with his eyes blood red and black triangles showing.He had blood coming from his nose, a few burn marks,cuts and bruises.He seemed to recognize the woman and growled even louder.There was something my parents weren't telling me and guessing how he looked, it was about the vampire and werewolf thing.I looked at them and was sure that my dad saw me but he if he did, he said nothing about it.

Tears were flowing freely from my eyes.Memories flooded back and I felt guilt,anger and many other emotions build up inside as the tears fell, one by one, but their was one emotion I felt more then anything else, Regret. I looked away from them and at the ground, If I haven't of run away like a coward this probably would of never happened part of me said, the part of regret. No matter what though, this would of happened. If I stayed they would take me to, Its better that I ran away so they couldn't get me, the other part- Logic- said. I looked back, The logical part of me said to leave as they could not be saved but my stubborn side said to stay and fight.

Even though they hid the truth from me, I still loved them, nothing- not even the worst arguments or battles- would change that. They helped me in my times of need, comforted me when I was upset and have always been there for me. I didn't know what to do, without them, I was lost. They would know what to right now but they weren't here, they were being taken to who knows where.  My parents were chucked into the back of a van and the woman climbed onto the roof as it headed off.

I wanted to chase after them but, no matter how hard I willed myself to move, I couldn't. I just stared at the leaving van tears falling. As it faded into the distance into a cloud of dust, I felt a wave of guilt overtake the regret. I could of done something but..I did nothing. My parents were gone, my house was just a pile of ashes and I had nowhere to go. All my money,clothes, or anything else were in that house.All my memories..now just ashes..and it was all my fault. I fell down to my knees letting go of the emotions that had built up in sobs. "Are you okay?" A girls voice asked from behind me.

A/N : note:'this note is completely unimportant to the story and a waste of time. If you do read it please listen to it

1. I have a secret to say, please go to 7

2. SO SORRY!! Try 12

3. Look at 6

4. Look again at 8, don't be late

5. Don't get angry..Try 2

6. Please don't get mad but look at 9

7. Sorry but its at 3

8. Sorry but try 11

9. Im sorry for doing this but..look at 15

10. Try 13 not me

11. ..............BOOP! ~

12. Its not here, try 14

13. 10 lied, try 5

14. try 4 for the secret

15. Look at 10, it may have a clue
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Awesome story
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on December 11, 2014
Love the update!
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on October 03, 2014
I LOVE IT!!
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That may be the last chapter published on here for two weeks and a half. See the update on my wall to know why.
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on September 19, 2014
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on September 19, 2014
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on September 19, 2014
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on September 18, 2014
Yeah I kinda have writers block ATM,
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on July 03, 2014
You should really finish this
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on July 03, 2014
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on June 24, 2014
OMG I love the authors note! I'm glad you mentioned me and Crystal. I can't wait to read The Celestial Born!!!
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on June 23, 2014
Awww! Thanks, the new story sounds awesome
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on June 23, 2014
@Crystal thanks
@MJ district ^.^ and np
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on May 31, 2014
Yay you wrote more!!!!!! This is really good, thanks for including Gwen!
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on May 31, 2014
awesome!!!
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on May 31, 2014
Working on it
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on May 27, 2014
:0 please write more!
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on May 27, 2014
I was bored so i did that, and i'm working on it
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on May 26, 2014
LOL I like the thing at the end! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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on May 25, 2014
I just put it there randomly :3
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on May 24, 2014
XD I went through the note! :P
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on May 24, 2014
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on May 24, 2014
OMG this is amazing
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on May 24, 2014
I try :D
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on May 24, 2014
Amazing so far!
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on May 24, 2014
Its fine
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on May 24, 2014
I have not been working on it much to be truthful..:( I will work on it today..hopefully, irl I have my life to deal with..
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on May 24, 2014
Awesome!
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on May 23, 2014
You will see :3
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on May 23, 2014
Character form in chapter one
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on May 23, 2014
Oh sorry for that for having the mom named dawn I mean..just seemed to go and those are the normal names I use for Crimsons or aria parents..I don't mind and just p.m me the details
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on May 23, 2014
I love it! I know you said you may or may not accept OC characters, but can I have an OC? I would normally chose the name Dawn, but that's the mom's name in the story.
*thinking*
*STILL thinking*
Gwen maybe?
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