The Only Good Kind Of Trouble

The Only Good Kind Of Trouble

Meet Jaden Antonio Smith. But just call her Jade for short. She's not like most girls. For one she's a tomboy, she loves rock music, she is obsessed with poetry, and beat anybody on any game. She's not a rebel really, the only bad thing she ever did was lie to her sister about using her toothbrush. She has straight black hair, hazel eyes, and a beautiful smile. When you see her you might see happiness, but inside she's broken. Her parents died when she was three years old, so now she's living with her cousin Regina and her kids out in Hemet, California. She meets a boy her age named Axel. He's every girl's dream. Sweet, romantic, charming, has gorgeous eyes, and is reliable. But the only drawback is that he's a bad boy.

published on February 20, 2015not completed

Good Girl Meets Bad Boy

I waited outside the school building for my sister Sarah. She had after school detention because of something stupid. As she opened the door I had my eyes on this boy I had seen before. His name is Axel. Everyone says he's a bad boy. I never really looked into that. I just saw him as a person. A very charming person. "Hey!" she says to me. "Who ya looking at?" she asks.

"Him," I say pointing to Axel.

"Oh of course, he's hot, well to you." she shakes her head. "You're a tomboy, but yet you're the goody two shoe kind. How dumb is that?" I shove her playfully as she pretends to fall. "Ahh! That hurt!" she says in a jokingly way. "I know him,"

"You do?"

"Yeah, duh. He's in all my classes, even homeroom. He's very intelligent."

"Oh really." I say while looking at him. He finally turns around. I look away.

"Hey Ax!" Sarah says to him.

He nods. "Sup?"

"Meet my sister, Jaden. But call her Jade for short." she tells him. He looks me up and down. I could tell he was quite satisfied with what he saw.

"Hey," he says to me while his eyes were still hooked on me.

"Hello."

"You're very, interesting." he says while looking me in the eyes. I look at him in the eyes too. I smile.

"Are you coming with my sister, and I?"

He looks over at her.  She shrugs and gives him an "If you want to you can," gesture. "Yeah." he says.

I didn't know how to feel. "So where are we off to?" I ask.

"Wherever you want, the night is yours." he tells me. I glance at my sister then back at him.

"Alright,"

Me, Axel, and my sister headed towards the car. The car my parents had given her for her 16th birthday. Me and Axel sat in the backseat while Sarah drove. I could tell this night was going to get wild just by the look of eyes. Hypnotizing. I felt like I would do anything, anything for him. I didn't care if it was wrong. Well at least not tonight.
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on February 20, 2015
What should I add next?
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on February 20, 2015
Thanks. I thought it was bad. I published it on Wattpad too.
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on February 20, 2015
good story!
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on February 20, 2015
I will add more later. Tell me what you think!
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I really like it
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@luckpup I'll continue to write more
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on February 25, 2015
Wow, thanks. I thought the story was terrible.
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