Black Crow's Beginning

This is my Creepypasta OC, Black Roses, beginning. If I do something wrong, please don't yell at me... Enjoy!

published on January 15, 2016not completed

The Taste

Jordan tried liver (EJ was mad after she almost threw up), Blood, eyes, nails, and a bunch of things that almost made her sick. When it was over, Jordan was glad. But something was missing. "Do you have skin?" Hoodie, EJ, and Jeff look at each other. "Ummm... You're not going to like it." Jeff lightly put her down. "I don't know if I've never tried." They all looked at each other again, and shrugged. "Why not?" She asked. Hoodie walked over to a cabinet. He pulled out a box. Taking out a small piece, he handed it to her. "Here." She looked at it for a total of five seconds, and plopped it in her mouth. "Mm. This is good." She looked at the box. It looked fresh. "Can I have some more?" Jeff shook his head. "No." "Oh. That's okay!"
Hoodie, who almost threw up, went out. Ten minutes later, Jane, Hoodie, and Slendy walk into the room. "So, you like flesh. Good we haven't had anyone like that since... Red Crow." Jane had tears in her eyes as she said this. "Red Crow? Who-" "Not now." Jeff whispered in her ear. Jane snarled at him. "Jerk." She mumbled. "Slender, what-" Slender walked over to her. "No matter what you see, come back to me, after you finish, and don't be afraid." Slender was about five inches from her face. "Have fun, child." He hugged her. "Bye, Slendy!"
EJ and Hoodie stayed back, for weird reasons. Jeff and Jordan both walked to the woods. "I would stay along the Path. Slendy tends to pop out and scare you if you stray too far, then he gets... well, you saw earlier." She winced, remembering the attack. They reached a little village, and Jeff put on a weird smile. "Jeff...? What's going on...?" Jordan was terrified. "Jordan! I'm sorry!" The smile melted. "Want more flesh?" She nodded. He handed her a knife. "Come. Quiet." She followed him into a house, where people seemed to be. She almost screamed, but she had to follow. They came across a woman, by herself, sleeping in a small bed. "Watch. By the door, and smile." She did, and after ten seconds, her cheeks hurt. Jeff plunged the knife into her left arm, and she tried to scream, but their was to much pain. Jeff took his knife, and took the woman to the wall. He stuck the knife through her shoulder, and into the wall. "Jordan. Come here."
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I like it, but I wanted to mention that EJ likes kidneys, not liver.

Other than that, really good!
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