Black Crow's Beginning

This is my Creepypasta OC, Black Roses, beginning. If I do something wrong, please don't yell at me... Enjoy!

published on January 15, 2016not completed

The Start

"Jordan, who do you want to go with you to the-" Jane cleared her throat. "Oh, you don't know." Slendy guessed. Jordan shrugged. "Jane said it was a surprise. Then I became a doll." She winked at Jane, and Jane jokingly, and softly, hit her shoulder. Jane whispered into her ear, "Trust me, go with Jeff. He may or may not have a crush." She nodded. "Jack, get ready." Jane called. Slenderman followed Jane into the kitchen. "Jane!" Jane turned. "Should I wear this?" Jordan still had her dress on. Jane gasped. "Jordan, no! Slendy, I'll be back in a sec. Jordan come on!"

10 minutes later------------

Jeff was waiting outside the door, playing with his knife, bored. Jordan and Jane came out, Jordan wearing a casual blood-red hoodie and loose capris. "We kida copied you Jeff. I had nothing else she liked!" Jeff and Jordan blushed. EJ and Hoodie came along, down the hall. Hoodie asked, "Can we come with? We were bored and EJ really wants some Liver. He's got none left. I told him not to eat it all at once!" "Not my fault! I hadn't had any for 3 weeks! I'm hungry!" Jeff laughed. "That you did. Anyway, sure you can come along! But we may split up." Hoodie gasped. What about her taste?" Jane came out. "I'll ask about the taste and anything else." Jeff gasped. "You mean..." He didn't finish. Jane nodded. "Maybe. But first find out if she has a taste. The rest we'll discuss later in the Attic. Everyone agreed, and Jane left. They all went for the kitchen, and Jordan sat down. She looked around, and saw a jar filled with organs. She got up, and grabbed it. Sitting down she asked, "What are these?" If it was what she hoped it was, she was in buisness.
"Liver!" EJ shouted. "Hm." She contemplated something. "For every answer, 1 liver." EJ sat down immediately. "What is 'taste'?" He hesitated. "Some Creepypastas have tastes for certain things. For me, it's liver." She opened the jar. There was slimy, wet, juice everywhere inside the jar. She pulled one out. There were only 5 left. She had to be careful. "Here." She didn't need them. "Just don't try to poison me trying to find my Taste."
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I like it, but I wanted to mention that EJ likes kidneys, not liver.

Other than that, really good!
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