the no named fan fiction

the no named fan fiction

this is a five nights at Freddy's fan fiction using one of my many OCs.

published on July 31, 2017not completed

Chapter 5: Magic

I woke up the next morning with guilt tight in my throat. I shouldn’t have left Vincent behind. I just hope he’s not mad at me. I tried to call Vincent, but I only got his voice mail. I walked down to the pizzeria in hope that Vincent would be there. I walked inside to find the night guards, Vincent not among them.
“H-hey, Vicky,” Jeremy stared into my eye, “What’s with the face?”
“It’s nothing, Jeremy,” I replied, “Just tired.”
Just as I finished my sentence, Vincent walked in the door. No one spoke. Vincent’s eyes were black, the tiny white dots glowing softly. I stared right into his eyes, but he turned away from me. I couldn’t stand the silence.
“Vincent,” I started, “Can we talk? In the back office?”
“Fine,” Vincent’s voice was harsh. He walked towards the back room. I followed silently.
“What do you want.”
“I just wanted to say… I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have talked the way I did to you and I-” I burst into tears-“I shouldn’t have left you behind.”
Vincent looked at me.
“I’ve always wondered what was under that eyepatch of yours.”
I stared at him and he stared back.
“Do you want to see?” I asked, tears still sliding down my face.
“I’d love to.”
I reached up to pull my eyepatch off my face. Underneath revealed a blood red eye with specks of glowing purple.
“It changes often, the colour of the specks. They were orange before I met you.”
“Can you see with that eye?”
“Yeah, but not very well. I keep it hidden, I keep it secret. You’re the only person besides me that has seen it.”
“But why hide it?”
“Because it’s magic. That’s why it’s glowing. It-it senses the ones I love the most. Right now that’s you.”
I put my hand on his shoulder. His expression changed. I put my eyepatch back on, walked to the door and turned around.
“You coming, or what?”
I opened the door as Scott was just walking down the hall.
“The kids are coming,” He said, when he saw me walk out the door.
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I have been in the FNaF Fandom for quite a while but recently I have been becoming stronger to the Fandom and when I saw this I had to read it. I liked how Vincent just straight up says he is going to murder some kids. I also have a OC (This is a lie I have, like, 6) who's name is Azure (They are cyan colored) they are a child and Scotts' Daughter (so they would See More
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on April 28, 2020
While it could improve, the spacing and descriptions is done well. I like how your character immediately dislikes Purple Guy after he tries to murder a child. It's more realistic than what some others do (joining him). :>
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I've released the next chapter
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Hmm...Next time, maybe describe your character better? I might've missed it, but I didn't know there was an eyepatch. I like how the eye colour changes depending on the current emotion. I find it unique. Also, I think your character's relationship with Vincent is moving a bit too quickly. The interactions between them in this chapter remind me of a couple who See More
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on August 03, 2017
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on August 03, 2017
also your going to be so disappointed when i add the next chapter
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I'll be sure to review it once you release it.
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on August 01, 2017
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on August 01, 2017
I've still got chapter six to add :3 then see how you like it
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on July 31, 2017