Falling For You (1)

Falling For You (1)

Sesa was the most popular person in town, even for an emo. Sports car, social butterfly, caring family, friends aplenty. Then he met Elise, his polar opposite: A POS car, a single dad at his wits end, anti-social, and only her adoptive sister Akiko to call on. Who knows what will happen when they finaly admit to being in love with each other?

published on May 12, 2017completed

Purgetory

Purgetory Sesa walked in the cold night, next to Elise.

He smiled at her, then kissed her forhead.
"So... Are you ok?" He asks, smiling a little.
She sighs, clinging to his arm.
"Sesa, theres something we need to talk about." She says suddenly, smiling to herself.

"Well, thats-"
A man stepped out of the shadows, holding a gun to Sesa as he said, "Listen up. I know who you are, so theres no need to scream. Just hand me the money or you die. The bitch too."

Elise squeeked and held to Sesa tighter.
They were getting mugged!

"Listen to me," Sesa says, slowly pulling out his wallet, "Theres no need for the gun. Just put that away and we'll talk about this."
The man shakes his head, snatching the wallet away from Sesa, turning his attention to Elise.
"Gimme your purse, bitch!" He says, grabbing her and aiming the gun at her. She screamed as Sesa pulled out a combat knife and tackled the man to the ground as he fired twice, directly into Sesa's skull, killing him.

Elise screamed again, and the man fired the pistol right between her eyes.

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Elise woke up next to Sesa, in the water of a mountain spring.
"What the..."
She sat up, looking around and seeing literal floating islands with their own mountain springs.

Sesa sat up, confused as well.
"What happened to the mugger?" He asks, feeling the hole in his head.
"I dont know..." Elise replied, clinging to him. "The bigger question is, what is this place?"

"Purgetory." A voice says, sitting directly next to them.
They both startle, holding onto each other.
"Wait, you mean to say we're-"
"Yup. Dead as a door nail." The angel says, flipping the hair out of his face.

Both of their jaws drop, and Elise began to cry.
"Well," Sesa states, holding her closely, "That... That sucks." as the angel flaps his wings and leaves the two to adjust to their new home.
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Great story!!!!!!!
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on October 04, 2017
Plot twist!!! YEAH!!!
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Also making a new story
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Now shes the one with the bad attitude
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on May 16, 2017
okay!
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on May 16, 2017
K! Brb!
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on May 16, 2017
Yep, yandere is always the answer
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on May 16, 2017
Idk yet. Definately romance though. And yandere. Always yandere
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on May 16, 2017
What is it about???!!
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on May 16, 2017
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on May 16, 2017
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on May 16, 2017
That was nice. Akiko and Bana, so cute
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^-^
Ttyl
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Okay!!!
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on May 15, 2017
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on May 15, 2017
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on May 15, 2017
Three whole days
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on May 15, 2017
But the tomorrow has to come
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on May 15, 2017
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on May 15, 2017
SHE IS MOVING AWAY NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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Eats popcorn*
What could happen next?
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Then it is a magnificent idea
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on May 15, 2017
The page you subscribed to.
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on May 15, 2017
What could this magnificent idea be? O-o
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on May 15, 2017
Bows*
I have an idea
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on May 15, 2017
Welcome! @xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 15, 2017
And back
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on May 15, 2017
okay!
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on May 15, 2017
XD
Lunch brb
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on May 15, 2017
HOW YOU KNOW?????
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on May 15, 2017
Voooodooooooo
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on May 15, 2017
XD @xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 15, 2017
I'll tell you.......MAGIC
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on May 15, 2017
000
How..?!? Thats what I was planing!!!
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on May 15, 2017
They fall deeply in love, and then one day, Elise disappears. And Sesa doesn't know where she is, so he looks for her desperately.
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on May 15, 2017
Maybe she moves so Sesa follows her?
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on May 15, 2017
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on May 15, 2017
can u plz write more i rlly like ur stories me and my friend @TylerWay r addicted to them can u plz add more chapters to this one and Obsesion?
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I AM AN ADDICT TO THESE STORIES!!!! YEP THAT'S RIGHT PEOPLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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YASSSSSSSS
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on May 15, 2017
TWINS!!!!!!!!!
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on May 15, 2017
I am too tyler my amazing twin we need more of these!!
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on May 15, 2017
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on May 15, 2017
Maybe Ill write a second Obsession...
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thank you so much @xXEmo_KingXx we love ur stories and this new one will be great
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on May 15, 2017
Yayayayayayayayyaayayayayayayayayayayayayayayay
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on May 15, 2017
Ok, ok, after I finish up Falling For You
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on May 15, 2017
plz do u know u will have mine and @TylerWay read it so plz write some more
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on May 15, 2017
Maybe.
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on May 15, 2017
yasssssss plz
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on May 15, 2017
DDDDDDDDDOOOOOOOOOOO IIIIIIIIITTTTT
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on May 15, 2017
yess plz do
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on May 15, 2017
Romeo an Juliet?
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Kinda
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OH NOOOOOOOOOO.
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on May 15, 2017
Evil laugh*
Juuust wait.
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on May 15, 2017
Evil laughs???? What could this mean!!!!!
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on May 15, 2017
Hehbe
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on May 15, 2017
NIce!
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on May 15, 2017
So much love!
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And Sesa asked her to marry him, so far this is a great romance story! @xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 15, 2017
YOU WROTE THE CHAPTER YYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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DUDE
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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on May 12, 2017
Once again. Lol
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on May 12, 2017
Yep.................
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on May 12, 2017
So many lols given
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on May 12, 2017
IT'S ZIANA TYLER
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on May 12, 2017
I ask that everyday @a.amaducci1122
and XD too @xXEmo_KingXx
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on May 12, 2017
WHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYY
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on May 12, 2017
Okay I will.
*dying from happiness on inside*
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on May 12, 2017
Lol chill
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on May 12, 2017
SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPYYYYYYY
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on May 12, 2017
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on May 12, 2017
EMO!!!
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I'm happy to see you!
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Meet you there my sweet!
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on May 12, 2017
Of course.
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on May 12, 2017
NM, you? Wanna chat in "For us"?
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on May 12, 2017
Dont know.
Anyways, whats up?
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on May 12, 2017
Why should I be MAD at you?
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on May 12, 2017
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on May 12, 2017
What's wrong?
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I thought you would be angry at me...
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on May 12, 2017
Uh oh...
Hey, @a.amaducci1122
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