The Cracked Doll

The Cracked Doll

Emma Coma moved into a Victorian house with her family, her mom, dad, and sister. She picked her room on the top floor and looked around. A floor board creaked, she pulled up the floor board to see an old doll under it. A long crack was found on the dolls back..but is the doll just a normal one? After a few days, things started getting weird...so find out yourself.

published on October 12, 2015not completed

A doll?

A doll? I slowly ripped up the floor boards. I blinked a few times and held up a doll. It was really old looking. I mean, brown hair in ratty curls, pinkish cheeks, a old dust covered ripped up dress and hat. It reeked of mold and death. "Well...um." I cleared my throat and looked in the floor boards again. I set the doll down and stuck my hand down deeper. I bit my bottom lip and felt something leathery. I picked it up and quickly pulled it out. I jumped and dropped the old book as a little rat ran back down the hole. I quickly replaced the boards and looked around the room. "Someone really didn't want anyone to find this." I said looking at the doll and the book. It was a leather book, with a leather string wrapped around it and a leather flap. I looked at it and touched it with my foot. It was covered in rat shit and dust. I grabbed the doll by her feet and rubbed the book with her hair. In a very faded way, a design showed up on the cover. It was to covered in crap to see it clearly though. I didn't take my eyes off of the book and doll until a loud knock on the door made me jump. I quickly picked up the doll and book and hid them behind the door as it opened. "Hey you little twerp!" Ashley shouted at me, I looked at her. "Mom said the moving truck is here, so get your shit." She said and slammed the door shut. I sighed and grabbed the doll and book and hid them in the closet. I ran downstairs and outside. "OH FOR THE SWEET MOTHER OF JAKE PITTS!! FRESH AIR!" I shouted taking a deep breath of the pine air.
~Many hours later~
I sat down on my comfortable bed and groaned. My arms and legs are throbbing from picking up so much crap. I curled up in the black skull sheets and looked out the window. The full moon was shining over the tall trees. Every now and then, an owl would hoot and the wind would sway the branches. I sighed and yawned. I shivered as the room got colder, and curled up more and more. What's up with the cold?
~Morning~
I woke up to get full sun in my face. I shot up and rubbed my eyes. Light dots blurred my vision. I opened my eyes and looked around. I covered my nose. "Jeez, that rat must have died." I said as the smell of death filled the room. I lifted my arm and to a deep breath. "Nope, not me." I said as I started walking downstairs. "MOM TURN UP THE HEAT IT'S FREEZING!" I shouted as I walked into the kitchen and looked around..no food. Shit. I set my jaw and grabbed the car keys. "MOM I'M GOING OUT TO GET DOUGHNUTS!" I shouted, only to get a 'I don't care' mumbled back. I mocked her as I opened the door and went to the car. I looked around and smiled. It's such a nice view. Tree's, tree's and more tree's...amazing, if you listened close enough, the sound of water moving was heard. I got into the car and gagged at the smell. "Gross!" I shouted as I saw the old food. I pulled out my phone and scrolled though the music. I hooked up my phone and played Falling In Reverse.
I kept on softly singing to Raised By Wolves and tapping my fingers to the beat. I was sixteen, so I got my drivers license so soon as I turned sixteen. After I got the doughnuts...annd maybe a coffee....MAYBE....I chuckled as I sipped my mocha cappuccino. I drove home to see Ashley puking outside. I stepped out of the car. "Dang it Ash, why couldn't you puke in the bathroom!" I shouted, she looked up at me, her face almost as pail as me. Her hair was messy and she looked like she had been crying. "I..it.it's whats...i.in...the...b..bath..-" She couldn't finish, she just puked again. I rolled my eyes, cringing at the sight of vomit, and walked inside.
I set the box down and the coffee cup down and checked every bathroom...nothing. I went back outside, crossing my arms. Ash was sitting on the ground, her arms wrapped around her. "There is nothing in the bathrooms." I said, she looked a me in shock. "You faggot! There IS something in the downstairs bathroom!!" She shouted, I looked around. Mom and dad always yells at her when she says that word..that means they must be out, they must have gone to take a look around the property. How do I know? I took their bloody car of course they aren't going anywhere. I shifted my weight on my other foot. "Um, I checked every bathroom...THERE IS NOTHING!" I shouted, she looked at me and stormed into the house and walked into a bathroom. I followed her, quickly grabbing a doughnut in the process. "WHAT!!! IT WAS HERE!" She shouted, I bit into the doughnut and looked in the bathroom. "There's nothing in here." I said with my mouth full. "NO!! THERE WAS SOMETHING IN THE TOILET!!" She shouted pointing to the toilet. I bit into the doughnut again. "Hmm..there's nothing, I think your mind is just full of shit." I said taking a bite of the doughnut halfway through my sentence, I shrugged and walked into the kitchen. She pukes like...everyday! It must have been a bug or something. I took a big swig of coffee. "I swear!! The head was in the toilet!" Ashley shouted. I shot open my eyes and swallowed the coffee and started choking. After a few minutes of feeling like I was dying, I looked at her. "WHAT!?" I asked, she looked at me and nodded.
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One more chapter and I can sleep easy
Otherwhise I'm gonna have chlaustrophobia infested dreams for the rest of my life
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okay I'm fixing the grammar errors right now (not Jane's texting of course) and adding on slightly more to the chapters then I'll write a new one
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Yay okay
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Wait..someone...cares about this..?
HOLY BALLS I'M GONNA WORK ON IT
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is there another chapter? i wanna read more!!!
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heh im workin on it ;)
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I gave it 5 stars. It's awesome! :D
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really? yay! :D i feel special X3 B)
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no one? jeez i expected at lease two people to like this story
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wow 4 people! :D:D:D
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