Don't cry tonight (Old)

Don't cry tonight (Old)

A backstory of my creepypasta character; Night cry. Warning;if you don't like gore, don't read this! Here's the first 3 chapters! ill be writing more on Friday to Sunday.

published on February 13, 2015completed

Mum,Dad were did you go?

Mum,Dad were did you go? -Midnight-

      

I stopped, trying to get a grip on reality again.
A few minutes later......

~mum,dad were are you?!~

I screamed for them on the top of my lungs but there was no answer.
I graped a small pocket knife ,I "barrowed" from my dad, and headed
for the door.
I opened the door,still no answer.
I whispered.

~mum,dad are you ok? Mum,dad?~

no answer.
I walk in the hallway,my breath gets heavy.
As I walk down the stairs quietly I notice a paper on the dinner table.

~what the heck is this~

I grab the paper and start to read it.

~Dear the last member of the Potter family,
If you ever want to see your mum and dad again you could stay
at your house like a good little girl or you can come and "try" to save you
parents by simply telling them to give me the code to your bank account,
well sense you are rich people.Better get going I don't have all night.the time ends
At 1:00am.if you don't show up and if you parents don't cooperate,then they are
life's are at risk, at great risk.If your brave to come the address is next to this paper.~

I crush the paper.
I look on the table and see a long slip with an address on it.

~wait I know we're this place is! It's the abandoned warehouse next to the junk yard!~

I grab the slip of paper and stuff it in my pocket.
I felt so dizzy,was it because I was in a mixed emotion situation?
I was so angry,but scared and sad at the same time.

~I'm coming mum,you and dad will be ok,you'll see,you'll be ok~
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OH OH OH may I help Lunacrafted can I?Like maybe give you a couple of ideas or such?B)
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I love it!
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on December 02, 2015
Omg it's been forever since I've been on here. Yes, you can help but I've been planning to rewrite this.
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Okay maybe you could make the little girl a autistic creepypasta...except since she is little she doesn't know she's a creepypasta and she starts to see things but since shes autistic she jst thinks its her imagination but as she gets older she starts to hear them and feel them and things get a little more creepyier..................
DONT CRY TONIGHT(new)?
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on December 02, 2015
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on November 24, 2015
SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!!
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Thank u I feel so happy ahhhhh I worked so hard ahhhh:D
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on March 08, 2015
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on March 08, 2015
The parents are NOT based off of harry potter
But the last name well....... I just like it
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on March 02, 2015