Melted (Frozen parody, using auditioned OCs)

Melted (Frozen parody, using auditioned OCs)

A brave hedgehog named Yamilette risk her life to save her sister Camille, the fire queen along with Sonic and his loyal companion, Wolfie to save the tragedy of summer to stay forever. Will summer stay? Will Yamilette lose her big sister?

published on July 17, 2014not completed

Ever since (Part 2)

After that day, Yamilette got up from her bed again to run to her sister Camille but her door was closed and locked. She knocked on her door and jumped in joy singing this song:
"Do you want to build a sandman?
C'mon lets go and play!
I never see you anymore,
come out the door,
It's like you gone away,

We use to be best buddies,
and now we're not,
I wish you would tell me why!
Do you want to build a sandman?
It doesn't have to be a sandman!
Camille: *Drooped attitude* Go away, Yamilette...
Yamilette: *Sadly walks away* Ok bye...
(Music gets active)

{4 Years later}
*Yamilette knocks on door*
Do you want to build a sandman?
Or ride a bike around the hall? *Crash*
I think some company is over due,
I've started talking to pictures on the wall!
*Winks at picture of George Washinton*
Hang in there, George!

It gets a little lonely,
All these empty rooms,
Just watching the hours tick by!
(Tick-tock-Tick-tock-tick-tock)

(Song break and instrumental)
Camille: *Looking at her hands* The flames! They're getting worse! *Eyes uncontrollably flash red then back gold*
Mother: Let me see them...
Camille: *Frightened* No! ...I'll hurt you.
Father: Here. *Gives Camille gloves* Keep these on. Remember to conceal don't feel. Keep a eye on Yamilette while we're gone.
Camille: Please...don't go!
Mother: *Bends down to her and kiss her cheek* We'll be alright.

That afternoon, the king and queen went on the ship and sailed that night. A huge wave sanked the boat and they were never seen alive again. Many people the next morning held a memorial for the lost King and Queen. Ever since, the kingdom was empty.

{Yamilette is now 15 years years old}
*Knocks on door slowly and sings sadly*
Camille, please, I know you're in there,
People are asking where you've been,
They say, "Have courage," and I'm trying to,
I'm waiting here for you,
Just let me in,

We only have each other,
It just you and me,
What are we going to do?
*Leaning on door letting tears out*
Do you want to build a sandman? *Sniffles as tears fall*

*Camille on the other side of the door doing the same. Her room is covered with burned papers and objects*
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on June 14, 2015
cool and awsome!
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on August 13, 2014
Just added this to my favorites. PLZ WRITE MORE!!!
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on August 13, 2014
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on August 02, 2014
Write more!!
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on July 21, 2014
Awesome write more!
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on July 20, 2014
Awesome!!!
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on July 19, 2014
:DLove it
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on July 18, 2014
WRITE MORE
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on July 17, 2014
Make more plz its amazing
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on July 17, 2014
Love it make more chapthers :D
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on July 17, 2014
Sad!!! :((
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I know....:(
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I'm Almost In Tears
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on July 17, 2014
continue please
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on July 17, 2014
Cool!
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on July 17, 2014
Awesome story hope you make more chapthers :D
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on July 17, 2014
Awesome!!!!
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on July 17, 2014